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AsylumPatient
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[20117946]
[2011-12-08 15:53:23 +0000 UTC]
(United States)
# Statistics
Favourites: 3234; Deviations: 33; Watchers: 16
Watching: 161; Pageviews: 4320; Comments Made: 814; Friends: 161
# Interests
Favorite visual artist: Lynn Okamoto (Creator of Elfen Lied)Favorite movies: Howl's Moving Castle, Spirited Away, The Cat Returns, Phantom of the Opera, The Brave Little Toaster Goes to Mars
Favorite TV shows: Ack... most anime..... Naruto, Elfen Lied, Princess Tutu, Panty and Stocking with Garterbelt... more...
Favorite bands / musical artists: Amanda Palmer (including The Dresden Dolls, Evelyn Evelyn, and Amanda Palmer and the Grand Theft Orchestra), Hierosonic, Breaking Benjamin, My Chemical Romance, Emilie Autumn
Favorite books: TOO MANY. Tops are Good Omens; Will Grayson, Will Grayson; Poison.
Favorite writers: Neil Gaiman.
Favorite games: Legend of Zelda Twilight Princess, Wind Waker, Spirit Tracks, Phantom Hourglass, and soon to be Sky Sword
Favorite gaming platform: Wii, DSI
Tools of the Trade: Pencil and sketchpad, hands... mind.... yeaaaah.
Other Interests: Writing. Fanfiction. Check me out. Dark Deeds of Mine. I write Naruto shit. That, and mental asylums. Totally fascinated by those.
# About me
I'm a moderately good artist.I don't compare with half of the people on here, and probably never will. But I still want to learn what I can and grow.
I draw anime. That's kinda it. I can draw alligators, thanks to a six-hour bout of face painting little girls.
I write. On FanFiction, I am known as Dark Deeds of Mine. I write Naruto and Elfen Lied stories... but I don't update very often. I try to make the most of the chapters I do.
...This was very bluntly re-written. Hm. I sound so irritated.
Don't really feel like changing it, though.
# Comments
Comments: 243
I'VE DISCOVERED THE SECRET OF KISAME AND SIUGETSU THEY'RE GERMANS
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e_e
today the teacher was talking about mercenaries as a vocab word and said something about hessians filing their teeth to points, and i was like "bam, im paying attention now. oh wait. pointy teeth? siugetsu and kisame."
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THEY'RE HESSIANS
OHMYGOD
FISH HESSIANS
XD
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WONDERFUL SWORD-WIELDING FISH HESSIANS
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Thank you very much for the watch!!
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I'm not sure if I've brought this fact upyet, but I very much love your musical taste XD
When I first started reading your profile on Fanfiction like a stalker, I was all like, "OH MY GOD. SHE KNOWS EMILIE AUTUMN!"
And I cried very MANLY happy tears.
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Well thank you~ And I yours, if you're a fan of Emilie~
And hey, thanks for going on my fanfiction account! I'm not completely sure if you're one of the previous fans or if you just went on because of the signature, but I really appreciate it.
But... Did you really cry? XD
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Yes, I like her peculiar style. A bit hard to gewt used to at first, though.
And I actually found your fanfiction account first. I saw the Eleven Tails, then the revamp, and became a fan after that XD
You've improved a lot C:
And, no. A little bit on the inside, maybe.
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Yeah. I started out with ones like "Marry Me" and "Shalott", so it was a relaxing ease into some of her more... hard core ones. I get what you mean.
Really? Wow, to think that dA link on my profile actually brought someone over XD
Did you have a pen name that I might recognize, or were you an anonymous reader...?
Ah, that makes much more sense~
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Especially the ones where she throws her voice, like Opheliac. She's got a godly vocal range XD
I usually check out people's profile if I like their story.
I do, but I never get on my account. Not even to fav stories or anything XD
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I. Know. In her cover of "Bohemian Rhapsody", you know that FANTASTIC high note?? and then her monster voice in "Liar"..... Godly vocal range indeed.
I HAVEN'T BEEN ON IN FOREVER. I KNOW WHATCHA FEELIN'.
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Kind of like a female Freddy Mercury XD
Except, not as happy. I also like her calmer songs, like Across the Sky.
I KNOW. WE ARE ANTICIPATING UPDATES. CX
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Exactly.
Yeah, her Enchant songs are all like a lullaby~ I think my favorite from that album is "What If".
SORRY
Q A Q
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I like her, but I don't think I know THAT many of her songs CX
Kudos to you for knowing, though.
All is forgiven.. for now....
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;D
BUT I UPDATED
I UPDATED LAST FRIDAY
:'D
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OH MY GOD.
**uncharacteristic squee**
I shall read it
Even though I should be doing homework XD
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THANK YOU
:'D
Sorry for distracting you, dearie~
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I like where this is going. In my opinion, you've improved a lot CX
And since I never did before, I guess I could review now, if you want.
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I WANNA SEE WHO YOU ARE ON FANFICTION
YES PLEASE
AND THANK YOU
I'm so glad it shows...! That means SO MUCH TO ME ; A ;
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FINE. If I can even find it again :'D
I will start off with what I like, then.
Whelp, I like the discriptiveness in your writing, along with the emotion put in. It may not seem like much, but I've seen a lot of fanfictions that had potential, but were ruined by the writing style being too bland. Just watch out for using too many adjetives.
I also enjoy where this is headed so far. The plot seems to be progressing pretty well, considering the confliction between Orochimaru and the Akatsuki, I'm looking forward to finding out what Oro has in plan.
I'm also impressed by the new Fallyn. Making a well-balanced OC that is the eleven tails would be something hard to pull off, but she seems pretty good so far. You give her some faults (e.g. annoying psychosis) to go along with all of her power. Not only that, but her lacking any knowledge of fighting, chakra control, or probably wilderness survival in general adds some more confliction considering her surroundings. She's also got an interesting personality and attributes, such as her library. I bet she's going to miss that.
Speaking of which, once everything settles down and she's back with the Akatsuki, I'd advise paying attention to the emotional turmoil and culture shock that would probably happen. I mean, suddenly leaving everything she knows and loves with a ton of emotionless criminals, being poisoned first thing upon arriving, seeing dead people, killing someone while in demon form, and just the enviormental change must be a lot for just a teenager XD
And as for the things that could use improvement... mainly the fact that Pein is just slightly ooc to me. I can't really picture him smirking too often. He always appeared frighteningly stoic in the anime, having a blank, piercing stare even when fighting the kyuubi. I don't blame the little quirks, though, considering Pein's really hard to get down right. I have trouble myself a lot
I think that's all for now, really. I didn't see too much wrong with it.
Damn, that was long XD
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THAT WAS LONG.
And thank you
so much
GOD
I really appreciate that.
And I'll make sure to use your SUPER HELPFUL criticism.
I honestly hate it when they get to the lair or whatever, and everything's just hilarious antics and bullshit.
It's
Really
Not
How
It
Is.
And
Pein...
He is hard to write. Usually, I like to have characters whose emotions I can manipulate in order to move things along, so I decided to make him slightly sadistic just to get things moving
I'll work on the OOC-ness, I would really hate for that to progress any more than it has to ; A ;
Thank you so much for that.
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You're very welcome XD
I'm glad I got to help~
I know. They'd probably be outcasts. I always pictured the Akatsuki having a sort of cast system, and the new people being on the bottom. Not only that, but there would most likely be added prejiduces.
Plus, it's much more fun to be realistic with those sorts of things. Causes a lot more drama XD
Yeah, I kind of figured it was for a reason like that. Your interpritation of him works out pretty well right now. Hurrr~ sadism
AND YOUR WELCOME!
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Oh yeah, like a total hierarchy within that criminal organization.
I would imagine day being like Hell week for newbies.
I know. Having all the characters' personalities under your fingertip? Not half as exciting. Some regulations definitely make for interesting plots and subplots.
The sadism
THE SADISM
Sometimes it pains me just to write it ; A ;
OHGOD WAY TO BE PASSIONATE ABOUT A "YOUR WELCOME"
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And picture that, plus being the weakest link in not being a ninja
Poor Fallyn. Poor, poor Fallyn.
YES. IT DOES. And a sadist Pein works out very well CX
FFFFFFT- But... BUT IT'S SADISM!
I wanted to be sure you knew how much you are welcomed.
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I knooow
Well
It's still OOC
So I still have to work on that.
I KNOW BUT STILL
WEll, you made a very good effort in showing it .__.
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She still has my support beyond the fourth wall.
I'm sure you'll do a good job fixing it C:
I'm can't wait to see how their relationship evolves in thisssss~
I'M FRIGGIN GLAD.
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OKAY
WOAH
OKAY.
THE RELATIONSHIP IS GONNA TAKE A WHILE IN THIS ONE Q A Q
STOIC-NESS DOESN'T WORK TO WELL IN A ROMANTIC SITUATIONNNNN
I'M GLAD YOUR GLAD
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No problem. One of my favorite things to do on this website is to find these spectacular artists when they just start uploading so I can see every piece of their art~
I can't wait~
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aw. ill try not to disappoint. :~))
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IT was completely my pleasure. You're a wonderful artist, and I can't wait to see what you do in the future~
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It was completely my pleasure~
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Thank you so much for the fav on "Lucky Star Vans!!"
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No. Problem. They were fantastic.
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