CodeLena In reply to ??? [2014-08-07 12:21:03 +0000 UTC]

thanks for watching!

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PeaceKeeperd In reply to CodeLena [2014-08-07 15:17:05 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!  You're art is very good and sometimes I envy your talent.  Hope to see more from you!  And, also thanks for watching back!

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CodeLena In reply to PeaceKeeperd [2014-08-08 09:12:14 +0000 UTC]

thanks! you are very talented too!!!

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SouthernWriter2 In reply to ??? [2014-05-27 16:13:27 +0000 UTC]

In the mood for a realistic military-spy thriller? I was wondering if you'd be interested in reading my new story, Enemy of My Enemy. southernwriter2.deviantart.com… It's about the Syrian Civil War.

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PeaceKeeperd In reply to SouthernWriter2 [2014-05-28 11:44:56 +0000 UTC]

I'll get to it soon.   I've got a lot of stuff to do and I have to turn in my laptop on the 30th, which sucks.

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SouthernWriter2 In reply to PeaceKeeperd [2014-05-28 18:50:09 +0000 UTC]

Damn, that does suck.

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PeaceKeeperd In reply to KrossKat [2014-04-23 10:17:52 +0000 UTC]

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Panzerfire In reply to ??? [2014-03-21 04:48:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the watch.

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PeaceKeeperd In reply to Panzerfire [2014-03-25 09:06:11 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!   I love your dA!

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Panzerfire In reply to PeaceKeeperd [2014-03-29 02:43:41 +0000 UTC]

Im glad you do

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A-Wakefield In reply to ??? [2014-02-10 03:04:45 +0000 UTC]

featured: plynwfire607.deviantart.com/

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PeaceKeeperd In reply to A-Wakefield [2014-02-10 11:33:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much, plyn!    

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A-Wakefield In reply to PeaceKeeperd [2014-02-10 13:04:50 +0000 UTC]

Glad to help peacekeeper!

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SouthernWriter2 In reply to ??? [2013-12-23 19:44:57 +0000 UTC]

Chapter 2 of The Retaliation is up.

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PeaceKeeperd In reply to SouthernWriter2 [2013-12-27 16:28:00 +0000 UTC]

Good job!  Just read it!

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SouthernWriter2 In reply to PeaceKeeperd [2013-12-28 00:31:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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SouthernWriter2 In reply to ??? [2013-12-01 06:35:46 +0000 UTC]

I think we're both screwed. This guy just wrote a really good entry to the short story competition. lugal.deviantart.com/art/The-G… What do you think?

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PeaceKeeperd In reply to SouthernWriter2 [2013-12-02 03:30:36 +0000 UTC]

I have complete confidence that we can stand up to that story.  It looks good, but, like you, the final fight was anti-climatic and that alone could take away from the experience, especially when it seemed like a fight that was sure to be VERY climatic.  I think we both have a chance in general.  I'm not worried and I'm completely confident in winning 1st.  Hopefully, you will be too.  XD

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SouthernWriter2 In reply to PeaceKeeperd [2013-12-03 14:43:19 +0000 UTC]

Now that I think about it, the story really loses momentum at the end. Besides the anticlimactic final fight, the villain has no dialogue. None at all. No personality. If there had been character interaction between True and Isengrim, that would have been more interesting. Two werewolves communicating, maybe with one trying to pick a side. Instead, the conclusion was more like "Something happens. The end. That's it." Honestly, I was looking forward to a werewolf death battle.

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PeaceKeeperd In reply to SouthernWriter2 [2013-12-04 11:35:34 +0000 UTC]

I read it again and it really lost a lot of momentum at the end, especially at the final fight.  The villain was nearly just a name and a character with no dialogue or life.  The story itself would've been much better if it did included the above into the story. 

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SouthernWriter2 In reply to PeaceKeeperd [2013-12-06 16:32:09 +0000 UTC]

I agree. 

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SouthernWriter2 In reply to ??? [2013-11-23 03:31:19 +0000 UTC]

I just started a sequel to The Return. It's called The Retaliation.

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PeaceKeeperd In reply to SouthernWriter2 [2013-11-25 21:25:54 +0000 UTC]

I read it!  That's a really interesting beginning my friend.  How about a new challenge?

The Retaliation vs Battlefield 4: Lyoko Warriors?

I know I didn't finish MOH LW, but, I will soon.  And, I want to make sure to finish this.  Wanna friendly competition?

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SouthernWriter2 In reply to PeaceKeeperd [2013-11-25 22:19:26 +0000 UTC]

DEAL!!! You'll put it on Deviantart, right?

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PeaceKeeperd In reply to SouthernWriter2 [2013-11-25 22:23:50 +0000 UTC]

Just did!  Prologue: Part 1!

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SouthernWriter2 In reply to PeaceKeeperd [2013-11-25 22:25:00 +0000 UTC]

Damn, that was fast! By the way, did you get a chance to check out my entry?

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PeaceKeeperd In reply to SouthernWriter2 [2013-11-25 22:26:59 +0000 UTC]

I did.  And, I loved it!    I really liked the detail and the story and the accuracy to the slang they used. 

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SouthernWriter2 In reply to PeaceKeeperd [2013-11-25 22:30:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. The research wasn't easy, so I'm glad it paid off.

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PeaceKeeperd In reply to SouthernWriter2 [2013-11-25 22:33:09 +0000 UTC]

It really did pay off!   Nice work!

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SouthernWriter2 In reply to ??? [2013-11-12 02:59:20 +0000 UTC]

I'm tagging you southernwriter2.deviantart.com…

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SouthernWriter2 In reply to ??? [2013-11-05 11:53:20 +0000 UTC]

What do you think of this poll Comical1 put out? comical1.deviantart.com/journa…

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PilotSolaris In reply to ??? [2013-08-22 15:41:30 +0000 UTC]

You like Code Lyoko?

<.<

>.>

*watches*

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PeaceKeeperd In reply to PilotSolaris [2013-08-22 16:10:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you and I love the show. But, I love other shows as well. But, overall, I really love it.

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PilotSolaris In reply to PeaceKeeperd [2013-08-22 21:00:46 +0000 UTC]

Same here. Code Lyoko was in a way my childhood, so it has a special place in my heart.

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PeaceKeeperd In reply to Zenoxen [2013-07-30 04:20:13 +0000 UTC]

No prob. Anything for a friend.

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SouthernWriter2 In reply to ??? [2013-07-26 18:55:33 +0000 UTC]

Read the latest chapter. I really liked it. It was a nice interlude between war and violence. I've gotten a few chapters of The Return up, recently. I didn't know if you'd read them or not.

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PeaceKeeperd In reply to SouthernWriter2 [2013-07-27 04:30:23 +0000 UTC]

I have. They were really good! Just cant wait for the finale!

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SouthernWriter2 In reply to PeaceKeeperd [2013-07-27 05:17:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, man. This latest chapter I'm working on is one of the most difficult I've ever done because how nuanced it is. It relies so much on emotion and a relationship that it requires a delicate touch and precision. I feel like I'm stepping into a minefield writing this one, because of how easy it is to screw something like this up. Wish me luck. 

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PeaceKeeperd In reply to SouthernWriter2 [2013-07-27 05:31:24 +0000 UTC]

Good luck, man. Wish me luck as well, I have a long way to go for Lyoko Warrior and I'm figuring things out as I go. The forward chapters as well rely heavily on emotion and also relationships. I can't even afford to screw it up, like you. I just gotta be careful where I step in future chapters.

It looks easy, but, I tell ya, it's not. I have to literally make myself cry at scenes to make sure it's good enough for the story.

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SouthernWriter2 In reply to PeaceKeeperd [2013-07-27 05:37:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks man. And you're right, it's not easy at all. It's funny, scenes of combat come easy to us, but stuff involving relationship dynamics are hell to write. Good luck, dude.

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SouthernWriter2 In reply to ??? [2013-06-24 15:54:22 +0000 UTC]

I was just wondering which title you think sounds better, Bar Fight with a Bloodsucker or Beware the Nice Ones?

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PeaceKeeperd In reply to SouthernWriter2 [2013-06-25 06:19:51 +0000 UTC]

Uh.... Beware the Nice Ones sounds better.

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SouthernWriter2 In reply to PeaceKeeperd [2013-06-25 10:57:06 +0000 UTC]

Ok, thanks.

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SouthernWriter2 In reply to ??? [2013-02-26 04:44:22 +0000 UTC]

I was wondering about some feedback for an idea I've recently had: [link]

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SouthernWriter2 In reply to ??? [2013-02-23 05:47:16 +0000 UTC]

Happy Birthday, dude.

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PeaceKeeperd In reply to SouthernWriter2 [2013-02-23 15:45:41 +0000 UTC]

Hey, thanks man!

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SouthernWriter2 In reply to ??? [2013-02-03 17:05:41 +0000 UTC]

You know who Chris Kyle is, right? That Navy SEAL who had the highest confirmed-kills of any American sniper? Well, he's dead. An American hero has died, dude.

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PeaceKeeperd In reply to SouthernWriter2 [2013-02-03 22:21:55 +0000 UTC]

I know, man. Saw it on the news. It's a tragedy that never should've happened. He will be missed. He was an American hero and still will remain an American hero. May he rest in peace.

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