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Meadonroe ♀️ [13914310] [2010-05-23 19:35:01 +0000 UTC] "FCK perfection." (United States)

# Statistics

Favourites: 7348; Deviations: 1052; Watchers: 259

Watching: 192; Pageviews: 74363; Comments Made: 3794; Friends: 192

# Interests

Favorite writers: Shungiku Nakamura
Favorite games: Tekken 6 - Any Pokémon game
Favorite gaming platform: DS. PS3. laptop

# Comments

Comments: 403

zenssoul [2017-11-14 21:44:02 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the fav ;v;

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Meadonroe In reply to zenssoul [2017-11-14 22:24:26 +0000 UTC]

No need to thank me. ^^

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FreezeIceking [2017-03-03 02:30:03 +0000 UTC]

Hey mead umm I was wondering if you could maybe give a overall review of my latest part of my septiplier fic I've been trying to improve my methods I think this is one of my best

freezeiceking.deviantart.com/a…

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Meadonroe In reply to FreezeIceking [2017-03-03 10:30:38 +0000 UTC]

Sorry for the late reply, sweetie. I gave it a quick read and here's my tips:

Punctuation matters. If a sentence begins or ends with a given name it should always be followed up by a komma. "Jack, you're being a real son of an arse right now!" -- "I don't think you mean any of that, Mark."

Also a sentence that is built out of two sentences, should be split by a komma. Ex: He knew it was gettin' late, yet ge kept waiting nonetheless.

A conversation that is ongoing, should be ended with a komma to signify that one sentence is followed by a next, unless the statement is a question or exclamation. Ex: "you didn't even see me there,"
"That's not true. You were just as blind as a bat!" "Was I?" A spoken sentence only ends with a period if no answer is expected. Ex: "you're just An idiot. End of discussion."

Despite most teachers saying otherwise, add as many details as possible. Not only dies it give the illusion of lengthening the story, it enriches the story, environments and characters. Ex: the ball is red. -- The ball held a crimson shade, with soft rounded shadows leaning over it's circular shape.

I hope this helps. ^ v ^

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FreezeIceking In reply to Meadonroe [2017-03-03 13:55:28 +0000 UTC]

It does thanks for reading

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Meadonroe In reply to FreezeIceking [2017-03-03 14:14:32 +0000 UTC]

Not at all. (:

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FreezeIceking In reply to Meadonroe [2017-03-03 16:05:08 +0000 UTC]

Did you like it though?

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Meadonroe In reply to FreezeIceking [2017-03-03 18:55:50 +0000 UTC]

It was better than most fictions here.

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FreezeIceking In reply to Meadonroe [2017-03-03 22:41:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Kat-theWolf [2016-12-16 15:55:39 +0000 UTC]

number 1, happy late birthday.
number 2, I'm big fan of your work and love it if I could have your opinion on a story that I'm writing, it's called The Story of a Demon and Angel. (yeah I know, it needs a better name)
You don't have to if you don't want to. I understand, I'm just stuck and would like some feedback on it. Thank you if you took the time to read this, and sorry for bothering you.

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Meadonroe In reply to Kat-theWolf [2016-12-16 17:20:40 +0000 UTC]

That's an extremely late birthday wish then, that horror-show was 3 months ago, haha. But thanks anyway ^^
& Thank you, that means a lot to me. I'd love to give your fiction a read, just pop the link
& tell me exactly what you'd like me to help you with.

Then I'll see what I can do.

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Kat-theWolf In reply to Meadonroe [2016-12-16 17:45:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! here's the link kat-thewolf.deviantart.com/art… There's also a "prolog" you can read as well. After you read it, I think it would be helpful if you could give me some suggestions on how you think the story should continue. By the way, it is a love story thing.
(sorry if the link doesn't work)

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Meadonroe In reply to Kat-theWolf [2016-12-16 18:17:55 +0000 UTC]

I read the prologue, which is short, yes.
Basically, a prologue is a short text that kinda gives the reader an idea of what to expect.
So, you introduced your characters, which is okay.

I don't know how you want to develop the story, that's completely up to you.
But if it's a love story, and if it's gonna be a slash or F/F one, that should give you plenty of directions to go in.
Especially if it's a love story between two entities that represent a different 'side'.

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Kat-theWolf In reply to Meadonroe [2016-12-16 18:26:45 +0000 UTC]

Well, they're banned from the place they were suppose but they don't really have a side. Thank you for the input, I think a bit of idea of how to continue it.

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Drawershonen [2016-09-12 18:47:24 +0000 UTC]