Zlatty [2004-01-12 17:31:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks on the comment dude !

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Zlatty [2003-12-22 23:08:43 +0000 UTC]

Thanks on your comment on Talking to his Shadow [link] . Sorry for responding so late. And, I have no idea what you meant by peter pan.

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Zlatty [2003-12-19 15:43:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks on your comment on my crappy poem [link] ...

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punkrawkpoet [2003-09-28 21:50:40 +0000 UTC]

miau miau wet katze

scream
cut to black
moviescreen murder in front of me
the entire world is mocked inside my eyes today
no longer acting as an organ
but a window
trapping me behind glass
sound proof. bulletproof
restricting the flow of words
words onto homework
the words they want to hear from me
restless laboured breathing
fade to beating heart
sleep sleep sleep
the veins in my fingertips are hard
because my soul can't even reach that far.
eat glass for love.
CRASH
car drives off cliff.

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livingbyair [2003-09-28 19:24:38 +0000 UTC]

do you not remember your password?

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livingbyair [2003-09-28 18:01:25 +0000 UTC]

what happen to your ocean-of-doubt ?

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dagloos [2003-09-28 01:28:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for you comments, welcome to deviant.

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punkrawkpoet [2003-09-28 00:38:24 +0000 UTC]

My legs are sore
and I use them as excuse
to sit home and feed my heartbreak
Alone with cold fingers
falling asleep to memories
and remembering the bargains i have with GOD
i will never fucking find my love
because my brother lives.
Step on my skull
shatter my brains
because its pointless to move on
without that passion in my veins

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punkrawkpoet [2003-09-27 02:36:14 +0000 UTC]

and today i realize
i have friends
i can be happy
i can go out with the cross team
and not sit and bitch
all along i thought these were the people
the ones have such high standards
when really
my friends had the highest standards of all
suddenly i'm part of a sisterhood
and nothing seems like it could be better
i still search aimlessly though
and i really can't understand it
because i shouldn't need the extra love and attention
when i'm finally having the time of my life.

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thepawn [2003-09-27 02:33:14 +0000 UTC]

thx for the kind words on my poem.

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auctivsrf [2003-09-26 02:40:56 +0000 UTC]

thanks alot for the comment. Its much appreciated.

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diversen [2003-09-25 05:52:20 +0000 UTC]

thanks for your comment and insight!!!... eurrgghh...
your writings takes me away... you live in a romantic world strangled with words and wozzess... take me with your sound and tie me with your whisper... i'm here to listen...

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punkrawkpoet [2003-09-24 19:21:17 +0000 UTC]

kaffee i am at schooooool. i'm supposed to be doing my stuff for history.. here's some advice never join a class that starts with the letters AP, its dangerous very dangerous i say. 4-5 minutes tomorrow about the battle of lexington concord and its importance to the revolutionary war. i'm really sick, and i can't go home because if i do i'll be forced to not run tomorrow in the meet, and i'm running weather i'm sick, well or dead damn it!. woah, i'm derranged. i must go back to actual studying now.. quite unfortunately. *sigh* woo someone is calling my name. i think hellloooo? yes ooh that was weird. oops sorry bye.
-j-polini

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lucasjs [2003-09-24 04:44:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very very much for your comment on the Bloody guy...^_^

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undefinability [2003-09-24 02:32:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the wonderful comment, I'm glad you like my decrepit gallery. You should check out Bewilderment or Comforting Hands, I've been told those two are my best.

Thanks again, I'll go through your gallery in just a little bit.

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danjoe [2003-09-23 02:43:57 +0000 UTC]

Wow! thanks for the fav!!!
..and welcome to DA!

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punkrawkpoet [2003-09-18 01:27:39 +0000 UTC]

kathyyyy i'm looking for a way still, once my brain is unfried i may be able to help .. dance and cross tonight i am veeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeery dead. now homework AP US and english. . . wow glad it's easy classes right?
-bto

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psychosomatic [2003-09-16 04:05:36 +0000 UTC]

hey, first comment hehe
couldn't remember your old password?
good luck with the new name
patiently awaiting the next or first posting by OceansFalling hehe
Shawn

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