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Rain847
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[2013-02-27 00:10:35 +0000 UTC]
"Secretary of Death"
(United States)
# Statistics
Favourites: 4125; Deviations: 511; Watchers: 147
Watching: 132; Pageviews: 20214; Comments Made: 3072; Friends: 132
# Interests
Favorite movies: Spirit: Stallion of the CimarronTools of the Trade: Food, bed, water, drawing pad, and computer.
# Comments
Comments: 38
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SOMEONE SAID IT TO YOU IN VC YESTERDAY SO I DECIDED TO WRITE IT ON YOUR PROFILE IDK
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stop tackling people
and ill stop aggressively favoriting everything in your gallery
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//just doesn't urge anyone to watch me xDDD
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Ah, well, kind of, it depends on what you want and how much you're paying, I've never officially opened commissions but I'd be willing to do something simple. Do you have a skype where we can talk over it?
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Umm yes what's your skype cx
And depends what you'd want
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LMAO
IF YOU HAVE SKYPE WE CAN CALL
AND YOU CAN SHARE SCREENS
but my computer has no internet until tomorrow, so me sharing screens isn't happeningΒ
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DON'T YOU NEED INTERNET TO RUN SKYPE?
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Wow... You seem brilliant at writing! I really like your recent story 
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Thanks! And sure, I'll give it a shot. But it's like trying to teach someone to draw, everyone has their own style and is always improving. I write almost everyday within roleplays. And reading your stories I can see you're good, for a starting point. Gosh, you should've seen my very first story(I did not post that at all, but it resides in my documents)! I do like to visit it from time to time, but even then I kind of want to rewrite it.
-Afterreading-
As to critiquing your stories, The Streets in particular, I do not believe I can to each one, since I do not believe I can nitpick, since I was once this way too.
If you want to make them longer and more in detail like mine(it's work though), try to watch your surroundings more often, watch everyone, everything, as creepy as it sounds, it can help! It's helped me when I don't want to cut a paragraph very short. Pay attention to your pain, emotions, everything inside you too. What's your first thought when you get a paper cut? Do you shrug it off? Or do you curse in pain every second afterword, cussing as the paper and yourself? Also-- read. Read. Read. Read.
I do like your poetry! I have a hard time with it.. heh.
For the length of your chapters(as you have previously read my comments), I do feel they are sadly too short! The plot is interesting but I've found not much story, yet, it is still the beginning, and I do hope I see more!
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