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Sir-Jayke
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[2011-09-02 03:45:28 +0000 UTC]
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Favourites: 43; Deviations: 136; Watchers: 41
Watching: 68; Pageviews: 24633; Comments Made: 1863; Friends: 68
# Comments
Comments: 122
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Holy shit, 17,000 Page views!? Jesus christ man. I was proud to have 90.Β
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Thanks for the watch and for stopping by~.
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Your critique was theΒ best feedback I have received for my writing, since I joined DA over 12 years ago on my old account.
I sincerely appreciate the time you took to assess and respond. You have no idea. That made my day. Sincerely, you rule.
- mids
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You're doing right by me with all this. Too many people just don't appreciate the hard work that goes into a detailed critique, and just get grumpy because I didn't give them a better review. Knowing that you appreciate it is encouraging and makes me want to do more critiques.
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Accepting criticism is the only way, as artists, that people grow and learn. I am tired of 'oooh neato'. I want someone to rip me a new orifice, so I can see my work outside my own egocentric view, and learn a bit.
You represent a trend that is sorely lacking on here, and it is nice to know it exists.
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Good to hear and good luck.
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Thank you, I appreciate it.
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Yeah sure. An interesting little group you've got there.
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Ok, this time I actually tried harder and tried to edit a poem.
I tried, but I know am stuck because I'm not sure what I'm doing wrong. Can you please critique my poem "Something died in me tonight EDITED
I made an edited an unedited version.
I tried to make it more coherent, but I'm not sure if it is or not. I am also not completely sure what I'm doing wrong.
Thank you very much for your time. As always, I understand that you are busy, and you don't have to critique it immediately, or at all.
The poem contains symbolism that I explained in the unedited version.
Thank you.
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Yeah, yeah, no problem. I'll definitely give it a look when I have time.Β
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Thank you very muchΒ but that is no longer necessary. 
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Also. I found a great group for you. #LiteraryPublications
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Oh thanks, I'm always looking for active groups to join.
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I have a quote I want to say here that rings true in you:
"Writers are the best critics. Ignore them, and you'll ignore some of the most honest people out there."-Anonymous
Also, could you give me some feedback on my poems? I need some. :U Also, how are my critiques?Β
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I do my best to give honest critique.
I can definitely give you some feedback. Any in particular you want me to have a look at? Your critiques are generally fair and well written. Definitely better than a lot of the ridiculously sacharrine and overly generous reviews that tend to populate dA.
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My most recent poem would be nice. :U
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Sure, I'll give it a read. If you want to have a look at any of my books, I'd appreciate that as well.
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I saw your critique on another poem and I would like to say that I think you are just the person I've been looking for to critique my poetry. I am trying to improve in writing and would appreciate someone to give me honest feedback so that I can improve.
I know that you are busy though and I completely understand if you do not. If you do, please do so when you feel like it, whenever you want, and however you want.
Β <-- A BOW TO SHOW RESPECT, GRATITUDE AND HUMILITY.
Please say the truth and don't worry about hurting my feelings just don't try to hurt my feelings. Other than that just speak your mind.
Thank you for your time.
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Yeah sure, no problem. Anything in particular you want me to read?
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umm The poem called "Whatever this is..."
Thank you very much. Β
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I agree with you on the grounds of the Pedophiles are not the same as gays by Haters Gonna Hate. Completely saw your side on the issue and thought her response to you was messed up.
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Hello!
Congratulations on receiving an honourable mention in βs Unexpected Contest!
As the winner of an honourable mention, you will be receiving: 1 llama from me
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Welcome to
Hope you enjoy the group!
Also be sure to stop by the group chat to meet other photographers, share your art and get tips and critiques! 
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Thank you for joining It's great to have you with us! ^-^
Thanks again for joining! ^.^
I hope you enjoy your stay~
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Well this is certainly an enthusiastic welcome.
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It should be. It's always exciting for our group to grow ^^
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Happy Birthday.......have a wonderful day.
HUGZZZZZZZ
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Thank you Jenny, I`ll be sure to.
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I hope you had a great one!
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You are the most epic person ever, being able to write out some of this brutally honest feedback. I must read more of your work and critique. <:F
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How kind of you to say. I'd be overjoyed to have another person read my work, nothing makes me happier.
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Hey, thanks for uploading so many chapters from Grimoire to #Novels-Only . Though we're missing chapter 21. Wanna upload it?
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Must've missed that one, sorry, I'll add it right away.
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Thank you for the kind welcome. Doesn't take long to learn you're quite the storied critic.
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