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jeffthefish
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[2010-03-01 00:10:36 +0000 UTC]
"Someguy"
(United States)
# Statistics
Favourites: 38; Deviations: 43; Watchers: 168
Watching: 33; Pageviews: 23660; Comments Made: 445; Friends: 33
# Interests
Favorite visual artist: Leonardo Da Vinci...GeniusFavorite bands / musical artists: Lostprophets
Favorite writers: Edgar Allen Poe
Favorite gaming platform: Oh, too many, far too many
Other Interests: Writing and Music
# About me
Well, I think the best way to describe myself from my deviation Is in two things: What I like and How I write.What I like:
I love Ayane and Kasumi from DOA and am currently playing through DOAX2. I love sexy maids because I find the idea of serving your lover extremely attractive. Lastly, nudity turns me off. I can't explain why, but it just does. I like the tease of it though, so an out fit that is literally just a pair of sea shells (Yes, a reference back to DOAX2) turns me on, but take them off, and I don't care anymore.
How I write:
I was inspired to write BE stories be I3reacl and have tried my hand at BE as well as Hourglass since these are things that I enjoy writing about and imagining. When I write, the main thing I try to keep in mind is depth and diversity. Depth as in making my work detailed and descriptive, so that the reader becomes engaged with the story. You wouldn't want to read a story that said "She grabbed her tits, and squeezed her tits, and she came" because it's too blunt and forward, but if you expand that by saying "her roomate reached forward and grasped her bontiful bosom, gripping the orbs tightly, her moans echoing through the room, as her excitement and arousal peaked and finally climaxed." Diversity deals with my word choice. I keep a list of all the things to keep in mind and different words I can use for my stories. Though its called breast expansion, you can't say breast or boobs as many times as you're going to have to to write a good story. That's why you use words like jugs, mammaries, domes, globes, orbs, and so on and so forth. That is how I write, and I believe that that is what it takes to write a successful story.
If you want to help, look through my favorites and comment with ways I can find pictures, comics, or literature you think I would enjoy. I also love feedback from my fans. Critique my work as much as you can so that I can become that much better of a writer. Thank you all for reading. ^^
(Also, in case you don't read the comments, the above image is from Doug Lefler's online web comic "7 extraordinary things." I did not write nor illustrate the comic, nor do I claim ownership of the character depicted in the image. I simply love the web comic and believe it describes me adequately, sufficiently, and effectively. I also recommend this comic to any reader. Thank you! ^^)
Current Residence: Cedarville
Favourite genre of music: FRIGGIN' ROCK
Favourite style of art: Writing
Shell of choice: Koopa
Wallpaper of choice: Screw wallpaper, I paint my walls
Skin of choice: My own, thank you very much
Personal Quote: Why not?
# Comments
Comments: 59
Hi! I've seriously missed seeing your stories in my in-box!
I just hope you find the time & inspiration to write more of them, and continue the storylines that you already have in progress!
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You're welcome man, good work on the renders
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Awesome to see you writing again!
I hope you keep writing more stories!
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Thanks man. I've mostly been busy because of college, but I'll do my best to add some more stuff here and there.
Just keep leaving comments and suggestions and I'll keep writing
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welcome back, good to see you writing again.
hope we can get the next dear diary soon.
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Thanks.
I'll see what I can do
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Well, Sadly the Holiday had me working all weekend, and I apologize for the inconvenience, but I have about a week off in front of me and an essay due for school on Friday, which will put me in the writing mood, and I should be able to get it done by then. Again, sorry for the delay, I've just been dead tired recently.
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its ok, im sorry for even asking about it
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Okay, so my prof forgot about the essay, but I do have a timeline set for the last installment. one piece of input I need from you though is:
Do you want the final expansion to be natural and/or unexplained, or B) do you want the pencil to be used again in the final part? in part, do you want more emphasis on the pencil or the expansion, and how actively do you want the pencil to be used?
Here's the running outline
β’ Greet at door
o Billy nervous, her ecstatic
o No one home
β’ Starts on couch, moves to kitchen table for better angle
o Sandra moans a bit from her shoulders being relaxed.
β’ As he pushes down on her back on the table, her breasts teardrop and press against the table, arousing her deeply
β’ After a paragraph of her temptation, she rolls over and pulls his hands to her breasts, with her own on the sides.
β’ After losing himself in his own temptation, he buries his face into her mammoth boobs.
β’ Stimulation, followed by climax.
β’ Witty end joke ^^
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id like him to try using it agin to see if it works, like as she sits on the couch or moves to the kit he quickly changes his earlier picture to H-J cups or something
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Kit? Recall, the last chapter will be him giving her a massage. But I understand what you mean by the sketch Idea.
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kit?.....lost me with that
anyway, i meant just before she comes over or something, he starts modifying his earlier sketch, and it starts taking effect during the massage
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cant wait to see it!
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Dude, Don't sweat it, I need these reminders ^^
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yo i remember you saying you had a timeline for the story, can i hear it?
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Don't worry, she'll expand past C cup in the last part
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*rubs hands together* nice!
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Just note, as I've been working a bit more recently, the climax may take a bit more time to write, but I should definitely have it done by the end of the week if all goes well.
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its ok man, no rush
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Hey, Here's the finished storyline. With this, I can start work on the actual story.
Student in school, boring day, day of test, doesnβt have pencil, doesnβt have pencil, starts searching through lockers and stumbles across #3 pencil. Uses it in class for test. Next class comes and he starts doodling pictures of sexy school mate. He draws her with bigger breasts followed by girls breasts growing. Shocked and intruiged, student draws her breasts growing bigger. Starts to pull back from action as he sees class start to notice, girl is innocently embarrassed.
After class, student walks up and starts talking to girl. She remarks that her back is aching now because of her new chest, and the student offers to give her a massage after school at her house. Agrees, and parts .
Student comes over, as girl takes off shirt, guy gets a tad embarrassed. Girl notices, begins to tease him. After a bit of teasing, she lies down on her chest. As she does, she notices out pleasureable it is to meld her breasts, and likes how sensitive theyβve become. Boy begins massage, finding her shoulder blades and beginning to weave his hands around the skin. As he does so, the girl sighs in relaxation, but with a hint of deviousness. He then moveβs on to a tai chi-esque massage, and the beating excites the girl so much that she lets out a moan. Boy gets scared, asks if he hurt her, to which she responds βmoreβ he begins to accelerate his caressing, the girl egging him on to be rougher with her. He begins pushing down on her back, causing her breasts to squish against the table sheβs lying on. She then rolls over and pulls the boy on top of her, demanding that he massage her breasts. The boy obliges, and the girl grips the table, her moans accelerating, ramping up excitement until climax. To rest on the table together. Girl responds, βYou can be my masoose anytime!
End
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now THAT is a good story
any chance your making this into one of your longer ones? or will it be the 1 off? i dont mind wither way, i just know you said youd do more if you liked it
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well, I may split this story line into two parts, part 1 being in school, then part 2 being at the girls house. If I did extend it, the two would have to get into a relationship and involve experimentation with the pencil. I might make my own major series based on altering reality, but I would make it an action drama. So, that' probably a personal project. I will finish this one based on your recommendation.
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well the story so far is perfect for what i was imagining, but i would like to see your imagination on the experimenting part, like perhaps writing something near the drawing to effect it....ah well, for now, im VERY VERY VERY happy, if you wanna extend it ill be happier,but if not, im fine
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Alright then. As stated in the recent journal, I should be able to have it up by Saturday if all goes well.
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really? whoah your fast
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Hey Got part 1 up. Check it out, tell me what you think ^^
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its brilliant, cant wait for the rest
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yo, just wanted to ask how the storys going
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I have a general plot timeline and set up in mind. However, I forgot to ask you one of the most critical points.
13) How sexual so you want this story to be? Here are a few levels of sexuality:
1) No sexual conduct, just innocent expansion, a bit of teasing and a very humorous synopsis.
2) Intentional Sexual connotation, with people noticing, the girl getting embarrassed or mildly aroused, and other such minor teases, still keeping within the bounds of humor.
3) Obvious sexual connotation, with the main female lead being aroused by situation and arousing herself further throughout the story through massaging of her expanded areas, except for her vagina
4) Masturbation through breasts and vagina until climactic orgasm
5) Actual sexual conduct and or intercourse between male and female lead, accompanied possibly by either, both, or mutual masturbation.
Which level would you like?
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can it start off at around 1-2? if he makes someone through the device, that seems right, but if he affects someone real,something between 4 and 3.....im a fan of climax, but, and you may call me weird, not of the vagina, if you wish to use it i wont mind
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Okay, so sexual conduct, and arousal, followed by climax, but no vaginal interaction?
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k sounds good. I'll start writing ^^
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thank you so much again
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once the drafts done be sure to send me a copy, okay?
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I'm enjoying watching your journal series!
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I'm glad. Any suggestion or requests or ideas, just tell me. ^^
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Haha, definitely! So far I'm just liking the small blurbs you're putting together. 
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Thine inspiration be thy teacher ^^
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And of course, I get bored and decide to write something. Hooray motivation! xD Thanks dude, it's up in my gallery if you want to check it out.
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