livingpoetsociety [2004-09-01 18:44:07 +0000 UTC]

Please see our latest journal.

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lil-latex-doll [2003-06-18 18:39:02 +0000 UTC]

Hey there!!

First off.. Welcome to DA my friend!!!


Secondly.. thanks so much for the wonderful comments on Regarding Fairies V2 and Mask of Catholicism (very funny comment BTW )

Very much appreciated!!!

-Ariel

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natdaddy [2003-06-17 14:56:37 +0000 UTC]

my canadian friend,

sorry i haven't thanked you sooner for commenting on "how you became a bitch". i do love people who take the time to really read my work and think about it. i will try and explain myself better right now.

i see what your saying about repeating a thought, but to me that is the whole point. this person was someone i cared about very much. then she started to treat me like a bitch. making me feel like a loser and worthless. so i had to pummle her with that thought(if you read it again, you will see that i am writing it as if i am talking to her.). when you are mad at someone you often repeat the same thought, just in hopes of making them feel bad for it. as for rhyming, i will go to my grave being a proud rhyming whore. most of my poetry is foder for my music. so it is writen in that way. that is also my natural writing style. not many people do it any more, but i love it.

thanks again for the comment. feel free to read more of my "stuff", and comment. it might help you understnd the whole of my writing better.

peace and love

Nathaniel

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thecorr [2003-06-13 00:48:40 +0000 UTC]

hey. thank for commenting on my poem.

i really had a hard time with the whole pawing line...you're right its not powerful at all....i cant really think of anythin else as of righ now though...and i really like the idea of changing the second innocence to ignorance....*will change it to that in the revised version* thank you so much foryour comments, they were really helpful i could use feed back from people like you. i'll be keeping a watch for your work for sure

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turelie [2003-06-12 19:19:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the comment! I'm gonna check some of your stuff out.
~Nicki

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earthfaerie [2003-06-12 16:57:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the comment.

Take care

Dee

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stealthestars [2003-06-12 14:58:01 +0000 UTC]

aww thanks for the comments.
soon i will be posting more

thanks again, it's truly appreciated!

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corraiv [2003-06-11 19:35:54 +0000 UTC]

I never expected a critique from anyone. Seems like surprises surprise me more than I thought. Thanks for taking the time out, I appreciate it more than one may think.

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runawayllama [2003-06-11 05:25:47 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the comment! I love to hear people actually give something constuctive, not just, " It was great.", you are cool.

---runawayllama

Ps. I have heard of the movie Brazil, and really wanna watch it.

PPs. Neil Gaiman is one of my fav writerse too.

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moonsparked [2003-06-09 19:28:30 +0000 UTC]

thanks for commenting and critiquing 'chocolate oxygen'.
i agree, i should take out a few "and's". for the written final version definitly, but i end up singing them anyways.
well cheers.

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xocatwomanxo [2003-06-09 12:26:16 +0000 UTC]

thanx for the purdy comment on "imaginary life" and thank you for actually taking your time to read it.. i'm off... i'll try to look at your stuff another day altho i'm tempted to do so now because the titles alone just pull me in.. but i got a school to go to oh mannn! yea.. you're on my to do list j/k ..

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ami-pai [2003-06-09 02:01:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the comment.

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livingpoetsociety [2003-06-05 20:23:34 +0000 UTC]

Welcome to the community

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janesusername [2003-06-05 07:57:21 +0000 UTC]

i appreciate the critiquing. little of that goes on here

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illamo [2003-06-05 00:14:56 +0000 UTC]

HAHAHA first comment
Thanks for commenting on my piece, I'm about to look at your work, but the titles alone intrigue me..

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