fu-rin-ka-zan [2006-12-18 02:45:21 +0000 UTC]

Wow, it's been a really long time. I hope you still come on! D: I think I had sent you a PM a while back, but never thought to check here. Well, it would be great to catch up sometime - I'm sure a lot of interesting things have happened. You can e-mail me if that's easier since I check that daily. It's chaospersonafied at yahoo.com. Well, hopefully I'll hear from you soon and I hope you're doing well!

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fu-rin-ka-zan [2004-08-18 15:20:19 +0000 UTC]

~xanaphia00
Currently loves Larry to death!!
is a Fantasy Writer
is Female
is a deviant since Feb 2, 2004, 8:36 PM
has 511 pageviews
is located in United States
last visited 5w 4d 16h 34m 47s ago
is currently
is an MSN Messenger user; Xanaphia_amikron@hotmail.com
is a Yahoo Messenger user; xanaphiaamikron

UPDATE YOUR SITE CURSE YOU!!!!!

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fu-rin-ka-zan [2004-06-27 09:05:56 +0000 UTC]

xanaphia00
Currently loves Larry to death!!
is a Fantasy Writer
is Female
is a deviant since Feb 2, 2004, 8:36 PM
has 456 pageviews
is located in United States
last visited 8w 6d 11h 29m 25s ago
is currently
is an MSN Messenger user; Xanaphia_amikron@hotmail.com
is a Yahoo Messenger user; xanaphiaamikron

*points to last visited* Do you ever go on anymore? ;-;

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zoyko [2004-06-23 08:10:26 +0000 UTC]

I have no monkey feet...
Oh yeah... Rating... Uhm...4.9(1-10,very harsh scale)

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fu-rin-ka-zan [2004-06-18 02:07:02 +0000 UTC]

xanaphia00
Currently loves Larry to death!!
is a Fantasy Writer
is Female
is a deviant since Feb 2, 2004, 8:36 PM
has 444 pageviews
is located in United States
is online
is currently
is an MSN Messenger user; Xanaphia_amikron@hotmail.com
is a Yahoo Messenger user; xanaphiaamikron

Looky kewl number! Haha, thank you so much for the fav!

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fu-rin-ka-zan [2004-06-08 23:58:18 +0000 UTC]

you must get some more stuffs up m'dear!

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Psyconorikan [2004-05-25 04:49:50 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the watch!

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sinkath [2004-05-21 16:40:57 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the fav~

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AquaSixio [2004-05-21 07:24:26 +0000 UTC]

THank you so much for the fav !!!

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kookybat [2004-05-21 05:43:31 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the comments and fave!!

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DarkAura110 [2004-05-18 20:59:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the fav!

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fu-rin-ka-zan [2004-05-16 23:08:43 +0000 UTC]

sannkyu for da fav

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gabbachoo [2004-05-15 06:21:54 +0000 UTC]

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some-dude-from-china [2004-05-08 22:24:40 +0000 UTC]

heya!~ thanks for the watch le!~ you got some awsome stuff here ^^ keep it up!~

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JubeiSpiegel [2004-05-01 07:06:29 +0000 UTC]

You have awesome poems! I am not really a writer....so i didn't know what meaningfull comments to give. But it's the thought that counts i guess....

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onewordatatime [2004-04-24 10:52:59 +0000 UTC]

Alright I went through all your poetry (well you don’t have much yet) and the main problems I had were:

1) Lack of depth – you’d come out with some killer lines, or concepts hidden in those lines but not develop them at all

2) Lack of punctuation – You really really really need punctuation. I cannot stress this enough. Punctuation is your friend!

3) Lack of imagery – this helps to give depth and also develops perspective – allowing the audience to be immersed, to feel as though they are there, creating empathy. This gives the reader a reason to come back and read again

4) Lack of flow – as I said before, you’d come out with some killer lines/concepts but what good are they if they don’t relate to the poem as a whole?

Oh yes and one suggestion that I find helps in terms of flow – try not capitalising the first word of each line. If you are typing in Word, I realise that it automatically does this for you, but you can change it and it hardly takes any time. This is a personal preference of course

That is all from the for now. Please let the account know if you make any major revisions, and I hope that I have been of some assistance.

Good luck

is sexy

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Icegirl003 [2004-04-24 06:04:06 +0000 UTC]

You have been poked
there is only one simple rule
~poke as many people as you want to, including the person that poked you
I
f somebody pokes you that means the like you!

this random pokingness has been started by

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pinktutu2point0 [2004-04-24 03:27:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the and the

pinktutu

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fu-rin-ka-zan [2004-04-23 22:48:56 +0000 UTC]

hiyee! yeah who was that? i'm curious now...newayz...so today is friday! yay! --ok i'm tired now...haha...have a happy weekend! oh and inspiration for you to put more work up (it WILL happen one day):

~xanaphia00
Currently loves Larry to death!!
is a deity of writing (that sounds so corny)
is Female
is a deviant since Feb 2, 2004, 8:36 PM
has 1,000,000,000 pageviews
is located in United States
last visited 1h 6m 49s ago
is currently
is an MSN Messenger user; Xanaphia_amikron@hotmail.com
is a Yahoo Messenger user; xanaphiaamikron

yeah...you'll get it b4 me...

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socal [2004-04-21 07:49:16 +0000 UTC]

hi, just in case you don't know it yet, you're now officially a member of the southern california art group at deviantart.com !!

~samurai007

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watermelon-kaiye [2004-04-16 12:14:04 +0000 UTC]

thanks for da watch! ^^

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redtailk3 [2004-04-15 04:30:50 +0000 UTC]

You're all added to the group chica. Hope you can make it out to this up and coming devmeet.

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watermelon-kaiye [2004-04-14 13:06:36 +0000 UTC]

eh!!
you have some fantastic poems here gal!
dey made me sho sad though
v.v;;

ehehhe...
keep writing!!
you rock
^^

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tamayouchi [2004-04-14 09:30:47 +0000 UTC]

Hee hee! Thanks for watching me! I shall watch you back!

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tamayouchi [2004-04-09 23:54:32 +0000 UTC]

Hi random deviant! You have some very deep writings here! Very interesting. Keep up with the good work!

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Usiku [2004-04-07 15:00:13 +0000 UTC]

yea, you have some really good art ^-^ thanks a bunch for the comment

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mace-wraithe [2004-04-07 05:06:28 +0000 UTC]

Wow, you got some good art here ^__^. Thanks for the comment!

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fu-rin-ka-zan [2004-04-06 05:50:51 +0000 UTC]

nyananananana! *bangs head on table* it says ur not on msn right now...either that or my goddamn computer is fucking up again...wups...sorry bout my language...hehe

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AkoeAbsolute [2004-04-02 09:46:47 +0000 UTC]

Hi !!! THANK YOU FOR YOUR FAVE ON MY PICTURE!! ::flying tackle hug::

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MysticAvora [2004-04-02 01:16:33 +0000 UTC]

Thanks ton's for the +watch!! + return!!

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RaptorZefier [2004-04-02 00:15:36 +0000 UTC]

Whoa, nice work, Mind if I put you on watch?

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hopefu1-tearz [2004-03-30 03:20:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the watch! Much love!

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pyromaniacmoonlight [2004-03-29 06:06:58 +0000 UTC]

Wow!! you're such a talented writer.. you have such awesome stuff posted up here! *bounces* I'd love to read more~ so I'm going to watch ya!

And it's really really early where I live so I'm going to go back to bed and comment on every single thing of yours tomorrow

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squirlruler [2004-03-28 06:54:00 +0000 UTC]

to stalk is a greta and wonderful thing

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Icegirl003 [2004-03-21 06:18:18 +0000 UTC]

hurray you have over 100 pageviews!

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fu-rin-ka-zan [2004-03-19 04:33:34 +0000 UTC]

and still 98...why won't it change?!

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fu-rin-ka-zan [2004-03-19 04:28:42 +0000 UTC]

so now you're 98

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fu-rin-ka-zan [2004-03-19 04:27:52 +0000 UTC]

hi der! just a stop in my fwend to get you up to 100 page views!

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nikkiboo [2004-03-12 00:53:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for the kind comments and putting me on watch!

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The-Organic-Angel [2004-03-05 21:48:37 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the comment and devi watch

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MemoryFinder [2004-03-04 07:13:36 +0000 UTC]

you are soo awesome thanks for the comments and such on my site!!!

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APMUTDA [2004-03-02 04:35:56 +0000 UTC]

You have received an invitation to join !!!

founded by ~Icegirl003 and ~ fu-rin-ka-zan .

If you are interested please visit our page! Thank You!

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ori [2004-02-26 14:34:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for that great comment. Really appreciate that.

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AkoeAbsolute [2004-02-19 07:27:45 +0000 UTC]

O.O Thank you SO MUCH for the fave and for the watch!! I think I'll go and wander your gallery. THANK YOU AGAIN!!!

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fu-rin-ka-zan [2004-02-10 05:55:44 +0000 UTC]

haha...thanks for favin' da pic! j00 r idle...hmmm...i'm logged in as my bros...(why ionno) or else i would chat...sorry! ttyl!!!!

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Icegirl003 [2004-02-06 05:48:30 +0000 UTC]

here, I'll watch you to.

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fu-rin-ka-zan [2004-02-04 02:49:36 +0000 UTC]

hiyeeee! haha...i'm gonna watch u...and i'm gonna put a thing in my journal telling everyone 'bout u!!! haha...

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fu-rin-ka-zan [2004-02-04 02:48:48 +0000 UTC]

YOU HAVE BEEN GLOMPED! Spread the glomping love around! Pick 4 of yer buddehs and paste this message on their userpage!

*dingding* RULES:
1- You can't glomp the person who glomped you!
2- You can't glomp the same person! EVER AGAIN!!
3- You -MUST- glomp 4 people! If you don't you're a terrible person and I shall take your soul!!
4- This must be put on their userpage! Nowhere else!
5- You must actually like the person to glomp them!

Remember the person who glomped you loves you! So you must glomp a person you love as well!

This glomping was started by ~ demon-of-the-light SPREAD THE LUUUUV!!!

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