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04me — im not will never be
Published: 2008-11-26 00:15:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 450; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 1
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everything is gone dark I see none as I walk along the shore I see nothing, but blood poor humans they don't decerve this, but we are still forced to lived by them to find those who sealed us for so long forcing us to be restricted and under there command soon very soon it will be my turn to rise and show my real side and the one you knew before will dissapeared and comback new so that i may see the fright in your eye, but to you i'm not the villain I never been and I never will be I'm not you the hero your hero I never was and never will be I'm only another person who's become a demon who needs someone to give me a purpose and not let me fell lonely and fell like it's all my fault I'm not your angel and will never be i'm a demon. but i'm not your demon you can't tame me I don't deserve to be in your precense by your side so now and forever I will be out of your reach just to save you from me my love.
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this is pretty intense. the similarities of both hate and love are intriguing to me, sometimes, and this piece reminds me of them.
curious though, i notice much of your work doesn't employ much punctuation or line breaks. is that a conscious style decision? just asking, because sometimes i lose my rhythm when reading, since i use both punctuation and line breaking as a guide. >< but i might just be stupid, hahaha.
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thank u for teh comment and well it's not well i think its not i just don't like to be to much with punctuation like if i were actualy saing the words myself well thats how think of it now.
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very nice, like a flow in mind that is.
Feels like I can get into the persons mind, the thinking flow that it has, great way to put it.
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wow it's weird reading this because i have the same view sometimes lol it just reminds me of how much i was tormented
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wow you too and what were u tormemted about?
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lets see love life friends family it goes on
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im gonna upload a bunch of my old stuff i think you'd like it
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really soon just as soon as i charge my old phone lol
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oh yeah there sooo good i think anyway
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yes it does because the way u discribe yourself.
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like well heard some place alse or something.
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