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0bstint — In a Haze
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Published: 2019-04-08 05:45:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 252; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 0
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Going through these soggy daysUnfazed
In a haze.
His heart was a maze
with nothing at the end.
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Sorry, I always stress over what to name my submissions. I wrote this random thing while trying to name the piece. It fits the mood, I guess. As always, I welcome any feedback.
Done with chalk pastel on colored cardboard.
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Comments: 5
Awesome portrait drawing! I really like the messy look of the values. It’s a cool way in showing form and structure of the face (which isn’t easy to do) but it creates texture to it. I also like the added green to the greys.
The one critique I have is the left (or his right) cheek seems to end a little irruptly. Like I feel it should continue a little more to his upper lip. I hope that made any sense...
It just makes the mouth stick out more then it should. Unless you used a picture reference that look exactly like this, you can ignore my critique. I’m not an expert on human anatomy (still trying to practice on them) so I could be wrong on this. That’s just what I noticed a pond viewing this piece.
This is a great piece nonetheless and I think you did a great job. Keep up the awesome work!
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Ohhhh my goodness, you're so right with the abrupt cheek thing. How did I not notice that before?
Thank you so much for the positive feedback!
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Lol, that kind of stuff happens. I miss things in my drawings all the time.
You're very welcome, You're a great artist!
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I'm delighted that it speaks to you!
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