Comments: 69
Hinatathebloom1 [2013-07-03 09:04:09 +0000 UTC]
interesting so far ^w^
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DarkAwesomeness2 [2013-06-25 02:38:24 +0000 UTC]
Hope you don't mind me faving this~
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ChibiVocaloidChao [2013-05-02 11:31:33 +0000 UTC]
Good but some parts I didn't understand... Sorry. But it's good!
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TheUltimateHetaku [2012-12-14 10:13:16 +0000 UTC]
asdfghjkl;' ohmygod.... this already looks too good x'3
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lifealwaysgoeson [2012-12-07 03:38:33 +0000 UTC]
Awesomes! I love punk hetalia.
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That1AsianChick [2012-11-20 05:16:35 +0000 UTC]
X3 Hot Damn series X3
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twobitRachel [2012-11-09 01:58:47 +0000 UTC]
DUDE! I FREAKING LOVE YOUR STORIES!!!!!!!
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AriannaSfytcon [2012-10-23 03:08:54 +0000 UTC]
I like this America better, he's hot.
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0xWhaii In reply to AriannaSfytcon [2012-10-23 03:09:52 +0000 UTC]
don't you like the Normal America? XD
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AriannaSfytcon In reply to 0xWhaii [2012-10-23 09:26:38 +0000 UTC]
I do, I just like punk america better
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darkkawaiipanda [2012-10-23 00:33:52 +0000 UTC]
Lots of spelling errors. I think you're messing around with past and present tense too much.
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VictoryWept [2012-10-22 23:48:29 +0000 UTC]
This.....could have been good. The dialogue felt stiff, and there were too many spelling and grammar errors for me to suspend disbelief.
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0xWhaii In reply to VictoryWept [2012-10-23 02:15:40 +0000 UTC]
I knew it ._. I shouldn't used present tenses ._.
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VictoryWept In reply to 0xWhaii [2012-10-23 18:41:05 +0000 UTC]
It has a LOT of potential... You're just mixing tenses, and point of view, and I think you got a bit confused it all....
I'm sorry, it's just I used to be an editor for a small firm, and I can't seem to really let go of that. >.<
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198329 [2012-10-22 22:51:53 +0000 UTC]
im always excited for your amazing stories!!!! yes!
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MisakiAyzawa [2012-10-22 21:15:46 +0000 UTC]
i feel special... yea special...
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0XxRavenxX0 [2012-10-22 20:43:24 +0000 UTC]
I never expect anything less than awesome from you now! XD
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0XxRavenxX0 In reply to 0xWhaii [2012-10-22 22:48:16 +0000 UTC]
-hugs. XD It's ok! Your awesome! It comes naturally to you!
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PerfectPunkAlchemist [2012-10-22 19:35:04 +0000 UTC]
I loved that series~ I hope that you upload the next chapter quickly!
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ozwot [2012-10-22 15:18:18 +0000 UTC]
wow super cute ^///^
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ozwot In reply to 0xWhaii [2012-10-25 15:04:14 +0000 UTC]
your welcome ^^
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Zeldapointdefer [2012-10-22 12:44:41 +0000 UTC]
I like the story; and all the other you made: but how do you do (sorry if it's a bad english) to have so much idea?
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Zeldapointdefer In reply to 0xWhaii [2012-10-23 18:10:10 +0000 UTC]
XD; sometimes when I have good idea to write a story for myself I don't know how to end it...
So I'll never become a writer!
But when I wrote something ( I've never wrote a complete story XD). My friends and my family want that I make some more...
but no ideas came...
It's the reason why I just ask...
So much writing tk said nothing...
somethimes I'm pretty strange, do I?
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0xWhaii In reply to Zeldapointdefer [2012-10-24 06:00:23 +0000 UTC]
true, It's hard to think how you should end it XDD but if you write and write you'll get used to it :3
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Zeldapointdefer In reply to 0xWhaii [2012-10-24 15:03:01 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, I think I'll try to make a story with a end in the holidays if I don't have too much exams.
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DemonChan22 [2012-10-22 10:48:25 +0000 UTC]
I like the story but the pic is like Al have been step overto Black Butler because he look like Ronald Knox in that one XD
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0xWhaii In reply to DemonChan22 [2012-10-22 11:06:02 +0000 UTC]
don't compare my America to Ronald! but to be honest they do look a like O_O
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DemonChan22 In reply to 0xWhaii [2012-10-22 11:19:56 +0000 UTC]
I would never do that but it was just the pic that look like him but America is cooler and a real Hero then that idiot of a grim-reaper.
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0xWhaii In reply to DemonChan22 [2012-10-22 11:27:06 +0000 UTC]
if America dies, he'll be a grim reaper but he "saves a soul" XDDD
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DemonChan22 In reply to 0xWhaii [2012-10-22 16:33:44 +0000 UTC]
one thing a country can't die so he will live forever XD
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Final-Legend [2012-10-22 10:13:33 +0000 UTC]
Fruk yea America! XD
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