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11KairiMayumi11 In reply to ??? [2012-08-28 00:28:03 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad to know you think it's cute despite it's flaws. Hands is really something I normally have difficulty in doing. I've always felt like something was off with Hawkeye's face, but it's to late to change it now since this is already saved as the Final picture. But I'll try to do it, next time I draw her. Thanks for pointing it out.
Hmm... as for the noses, I realize that most of the time I add the dot and sometimes I don't by looking at my other art. Lol, it's kinda like a subconscious way of how I draw. Like I said, I'm terrible at drawing hands, sometimes it looks great and most of the time it just looks weird that's why I try to hide it at most times and I know that's bad. Ha ha, so I'll just keep practising on drawing it. I do usually try and look at my hands as reference, in fact that's what I did to draw Roy's hand. I kinda feel terrible because I honestly just got lazy and my head was starting to ache since I've been drawing the picture for quite a long time. So overall, I think I really did rushed doing Riza.
As for the Folder, I didn't really planned on adding that at first. I was supposed to just hide Riza's right hand but sometimes I wonder why I changed it. Probably wanted to practice drawing hands I guess. I'm not sure if I could edit it without ruining the picture so I'll try it next time. Hmm, I'm thinking about doing this traditionally again since it gives me more control on what I'm drawing in a quicker pace (I suffer from Stigma so I can't draw for long since it strains my eyes) and I was originally a traditional artist so I might give it a shot after my midterm exams this week.
Now for the walls, I tend to avoid doing backgrounds as well but I feel like this picture would be best with one. Sorry, if I couldn't draw it straighter, my hands kept shaking. You see, I didn't draw this with a tablet since I don't have one and the mouse I usually use got broken when I was drawing the picture before this. As I stated in this description, This fan art is entirely made in my laptop's tiny mouse track.
Layers, eh? I used Photoshop so I definitely have that feature. But I don't use it often. It's been a habit of mine to draw on one layer since I thought it would be more difficult to fix an error that way so I thought I'll try to avoid making more mistakes this way. But lately, I'm planning on changing that way of thinking and use several layers if it could be for the better. You are right after all, this feature could really help me a lot since I'll be drawing most of my digital arts in my laptop's mouse track, so layers will prove to be a big help in my future drawings.
Ha ha, thanks. Now that I think of it I did put a lot of work in the umbrella the most. It's technically the first time I drew one and I'm surprised it looks decent for a first attempt and I do love drawing their uniforms. But I mostly enjoyed the part of coloring the whole picture though.
Well, thanks a lot for this critique. I doubt I'll be able to change this picture overall but I'll be sure to use your advice in my future artworks. Thanks again!
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PinsterWGlasses In reply to 11KairiMayumi11 [2012-08-28 00:35:07 +0000 UTC]
Well I'm really glad you are working so hard on a picture even with all those set backs! You really did do a goo d job, especially with that tiny track pad. All I can suggest further is redraw this traditionally and then maybe go over it digitally? Traditional is totally fine, but it will also help you get use to photoshop and how things work in it! And the overall picture will look nicer since traditional drawings are typically artist's strong points.
But keep up the great work!
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YokuMiya In reply to 11KairiMayumi11 [2012-08-27 20:14:37 +0000 UTC]
not a problem...i think thats the first critique ive done in like 6-9months...its definetly the only 1 ive done for fma... i dont like writing them cuz of the whole "minimum number of words" but that pic was definetly worth it.
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11KairiMayumi11 In reply to Aqua-Amethyst-Angel [2012-08-01 02:01:32 +0000 UTC]
Ha ha, thanks so much for the critique and I'm very elated to know you loved it, but man I think you rated this quite high. But it's alright, I feel really flattered about it honestly~ How I wish this would really happen in either series as well.
Oh, so you can't see the rain? Ha ha, so my mom's right... she can't see it too so I think I really did made the opacity to low...
There is rain in the picture, but I guess the best way to see is to look at it's full view size. Sorry, I've never drawn something with rain on it and I think I lowered the opacity too much since I thought if I make it a little higher, the white lines might destroy the whole image. Ha ha... Rain is very difficult to draw...
They are quite a perfect pair, and you're right they've been together ever since they were young and they still kept in touch together until they grew up and that's what makes me love them more. There relationship is based on their Trust, Loyalty and Respect for one another so that's definitely what I call True Love!
Of all the pairings I liked, they're my favorite, they're my OTP.
~ With that, I love to draw pictures and write stories about them quite frequently. Ha ha~
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Tigrette-of-Fire [2012-08-01 23:34:48 +0000 UTC]
Gah, this is so sweet! I wish this had happened....
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J-M-Smith-Artworks [2012-08-01 03:29:30 +0000 UTC]
Aw so cute! Hiding under an umbrella XD
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CookieBeef [2012-08-01 02:01:39 +0000 UTC]
Awww! That's cute! XXD
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ShadoeKat [2012-07-31 21:25:37 +0000 UTC]
That is adorable ^^
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kurosaki615 [2012-07-31 20:40:24 +0000 UTC]
This is great!! c: I loveee it!
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NayruElric [2012-07-31 19:56:14 +0000 UTC]
That is so cute! Royai just EXISTS. People who deny are lying to themselves.
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NayruElric In reply to 11KairiMayumi11 [2012-08-01 03:15:19 +0000 UTC]
Bwah ha! Exactly!
And you're welcome! ^_^
I REALLY need to learn to draw stuff on the computer and color it, too. Like, REALLY need to.
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5irob-IX [2012-07-31 17:51:47 +0000 UTC]
Roy looks great,but Hawkeye haves a bit long face.Anyway,great work mate ;D
Good luck with the contest!
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5irob-IX In reply to 11KairiMayumi11 [2012-07-31 18:20:44 +0000 UTC]
Np mate,anytime ^^
Aaaaawww,storming *^* I love storms :3 Here is too much sunny right now D: Its a pitty,because I love drawing while watching a storm... XD
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