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Published: 2013-03-13 12:35:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 407; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 1
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FINALLY finished. I'll add a shaded version later, Basically the story is i've just been having a really difficult time lately, but i try to act like i'm fine. But really, i'm broken inside.Really happy with the way this turned out, worked FOREVER and put my heart and soul into it :,)....
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Hello, I am Jojo and I will be doing a critique for you e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
This Deviation, I must say, touches me right to the heart. It brings out a feeling of sadness and longing, so touching.
The idea is not new, but this deviation has a kind of different feeling from the others that I can't really explain.
The colours of the clothes have been chosen well to match the mood e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
I love the way you drew the tears, it looks so real! the way the hands touched the face is very realistic as well.
Maybe you could reduce the numerous lines to draw the hair though, unless this is actually a sketch, so you haven't done the proper outline...
The way the words "I'm Fine" is written also plays a role in the picture. these words that is hand written instead of typed actually brings out the feeling of sadness too.
I love the way you draw the girl! She has such a nice figure XD It makes e wonder why she is sad, giving me a sense of curiosity.
Thank you and I hope it helped!
Oh and good choice of the colour of the background!
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Sorry to hear you're having a tough time, but glad you put your emotions into this, you can tell
Nice work on her pose. I might suggest trying to add some shadows and highlights on the figure to make it more 3d. But lovely work already
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Oh my gosh, you commented on MY art. I am so happy ^.^ you're like my #1 inspiration. Thank you, I'm trying to work on my coloring.
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WOWWWWWWWWW Amazing I mean you did a wonderful job with the hands
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It's really awesome but . . . it's also sad . . .
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True, but its a part of life ):
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life is a double edged sword . . . there's pain lies cheats uglyness poverty hate and sin but at the same time there's truth friends/ family beauty wealth love hope goodness and hope . . . so when things look bad just remember there are two sides to the sword
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i'm going to turn that into a drawing now.
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seriously!?! (just being an inspirational boss)
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