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21Mauricio21 In reply to 1gga [2016-08-01 22:30:55 +0000 UTC]
A statement, a summary, a description? Well... I dunno, I'm really broken when coming up with phrases and stuff. Never could do a single writing in all my years.
Some things though about the comic.
Frames 9 and 11 are missing the suit's pocket, that red thing is a handkerchief.
Frame 11, Gooby's eyes shouldn't be that big, it was just hasty copy paste.
Last line should be reworked into "ewerythng went btter then exkreted". You know, excreted, shitted out.
And the ducklings are indeed held with chains being force fed, if that somehow is not clear. Just like people do with geese to get foie gras.
I did intend to make some of the poop in frame 11 to splash into Dolan's head, but meh, it was already too funny
Hmmm... Sorry, I really have no idea on what to write. That's my weakest point.
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1gga In reply to 21Mauricio21 [2016-08-02 09:43:31 +0000 UTC]
That is not what I asked.. have you seen how others wrote their entries in the journal? Ok.. I'll try then.. since this comic has to be a single picture, I would go like this:
Gooby is eating at mc morky's and enjoying the hell out of dolan's special burger, meanwhile, dolan is observing gooby from a kitchen, and you can see a part of it, where dolan's nephews are attached to some weird machine,
which feeds them and forces them to shit non stop.
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21Mauricio21 In reply to 1gga [2016-08-02 15:03:15 +0000 UTC]
That works just fine, go with it.
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Lolqwert [2016-07-13 12:13:30 +0000 UTC]
Haha, nice one m8.
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Fincherer [2016-07-10 23:31:44 +0000 UTC]
Yas, is wondaful
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21Mauricio21 In reply to Fincherer [2016-07-11 02:31:29 +0000 UTC]
Worsd can't descrybe such levul of fart.
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