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Published: 2002-07-20 06:32:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 121; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 12
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Where does time go when you can count the seconds till your death,
when no grain of sand in the hourglass will know the pressure you feel
in the second it just stole from your life?

Then the actions you take in those last precious days
will rip you down to your core.

The mother in her boundless and selfless love
will never leave her children's sides

The movie star will tell the world her tragedy
all the while with a mirror in the pocket

The greedy tycoon will end his life before his time is up
finally realizing money really isn't everything and can't by his way out of this

And the priest will sit quietly in his chapel
waiting for his life to begin

And me...? Three days till destiny is for my family and friends
spending time with the ones who shaped my life

Two days till destiny I spend with nature
The first artist from whom we all steal

And for my final day I go to a hospital
and spend time with the sick children

Who can't choose how to spend the few days they have left to live



Dedicated to Brian, John, Mark, and all those whose lives have been affected by cancer.
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Comments: 4

utro [2002-08-08 09:27:00 +0000 UTC]

The movie star will tell the world her tragedy
all the while with a mirror in the pocket

those lines are brilliant, and so true.

In fact, i love this entire poem for its truth. It's showing of the unjust. I admire your last three days. I love this peice. Unconventional in style, almost more prose than poetry. Wonderfully written.

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sceptical [2002-07-22 08:34:12 +0000 UTC]

very good. beautiful in fact.
i like how it is raw, and simple.

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barswanian [2002-07-21 08:17:40 +0000 UTC]

Carpe diem...carpe diem

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phaethorn [2002-07-20 06:54:08 +0000 UTC]

That poem has lot's of emotions in it.
It's beautifully writen and it has a bigger meaning behind it.
Nicely done.

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