utro [2002-08-08 09:27:00 +0000 UTC]
The movie star will tell the world her tragedy
all the while with a mirror in the pocket
those lines are brilliant, and so true.
In fact, i love this entire poem for its truth. It's showing of the unjust. I admire your last three days. I love this peice. Unconventional in style, almost more prose than poetry. Wonderfully written.
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sceptical [2002-07-22 08:34:12 +0000 UTC]
very good. beautiful in fact.
i like how it is raw, and simple.
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