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The--Ticking--Clock [2019-02-11 00:04:47 +0000 UTC]
Heya, I found your work through www.deviantart.com/projectcomm… !
First of all, I think you did a very good job with the coloring. The warm pallete (and shading) really suits the character, and the little details on the background are pretty nice as well. Your lineart is really confident, with steady lines (also I really appreciate the subtle lineart color change, it adds to the overall warm atmosphere), but there are some little parts that should have been erased.
There are some problems with the lighting. The light seems to be coming from the upper right part of the drawing, but the tips of her shoes are are highlighted, as if there is also a light coming from below her. This, however, is easily fixable. The best way to learn how to fix this is to imagine a little light in the place you want the light to come from (if you can't quite get that at the beginning, I suggest drawing that little light, to get a better grasp of where the shadows and highlights are going to be placed).
Overall, I think this is a really nice piece. The cartoony style, combined with the coloring and the lineart all come together to form a solid artwork, and I'm certainly eager to see more of that in the future!
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99SamPanda99 In reply to The--Ticking--Clock [2019-02-11 01:49:26 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much for the feedback! I tend to get a little carried away with lighting and just add it anywhere without considering the light source, I'll try to keep that in mind in the future!
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KoreOfEmAll [2019-02-10 23:57:53 +0000 UTC]
Nice! The background and face don't exactly match, but who cares?
The lines are nicely done, and you can tell what kind of person she is due to:
#1: The trinket on her head
#2: The pattern on the front of her dress
#3: The pattern in the background.
Those three things tell me that she's a princess.
Well done!
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99SamPanda99 In reply to KoreOfEmAll [2019-02-11 01:13:16 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, but she's actually not a princess! I suppose she is close to one since she comes from a wealthy family, but I totally understand where you're coming from. You can read her full story here; she's my friend's OC!
---> Piper Reference <---
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ebee-the-artist [2019-02-10 22:56:56 +0000 UTC]
oml she's so cuteeeee! So squishy
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99SamPanda99 In reply to ebee-the-artist [2019-02-10 23:02:43 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I really liked her design so I wanted to draw her ^^
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xDreamWithinADream [2019-02-10 15:44:23 +0000 UTC]
She looks so cute aaa!!!! I love the shading style in the hair a lot, really shows the difference in texture from the hair and the clothing!!!!
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99SamPanda99 In reply to xDreamWithinADream [2019-02-10 19:27:34 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much! A big pet peeve of mine is when hair looks like cloth/clay, so I try my best to stay away from that.
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MoonBerryBat [2019-02-10 13:49:36 +0000 UTC]
AAAAA omg this looks so nice! Tysm TwT! I will add it to the list asap!
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99SamPanda99 In reply to MoonBerryBat [2019-02-10 19:26:15 +0000 UTC]
Thank youu ahhh <33 I'm super happy that you like it!!
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