Comments: 12
SuperVolta [2019-05-17 01:24:13 +0000 UTC]
I really loved this story, and this series as a whole. It was very well written, and I really grew emotionally invested in the story. Learning a little about what Kyle and Corrin has dealt with in their lives, was really interesting to read about.
However, I do have one suggestion. If you add a little more backstory to this series, that would be really good! Finding out a little more of what exactly happened behind the scenes, such as Kyle's relationship with his birth mother, growing up with the people he knew, as well as learning more about Corrin's father, it would be interesting to learn about. While potentially tragic to find out, I feel like it would build a good background to an otherwise solid story, as extras.
Regardless of whether you decide to do this or not, I really enjoyed reading this 4 part series, and I think that you are an excellent author and writer. You communicated the story well, and I could really visualize the transformation that Kyle went through, and I am so glad that they have found true happiness.
Great work!
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Shadow-roise-1 [2018-03-22 17:08:10 +0000 UTC]
This fast become one of my favourites story I hope u can keep them coming soon I am looking forward to see what comes next in this story thread
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Toby22636 [2017-08-23 21:24:33 +0000 UTC]
This is one of my favorite stories, I really loved it so much
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RachafX [2016-12-07 10:09:07 +0000 UTC]
... * dies in amazingness *
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