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SengokuTenno — Wet Kiss
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Published: 2010-11-05 02:50:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 333; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 4
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There was a timeThat place
We stood
Apart;
Flowers bloomed
Rain fell
Lightly
Upon our cheeks;
The sun shone
You smiled
At me
How absurd;
I stood there
Transfixed
Halted
Time almost stopped;
You walked forward
Time sped up
Fast-forward
So close;
You looked up
I looked down
Soft
Gentle lips;
Ah, so that's it!
How angels
Touch.
Wet, rainy kiss.
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Comments: 2
The only part that I'm somewhat unsure of is the "wet" part, because it sounds harsh compared to the rest. But then I may only be a little tooo.... something or another at the moment to give a good legit criticism. ^-^ Take from me what you will.
Anyway, an entrancing read. Once I started I had to continue. It was an odd feeling.
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