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TallyBaby13 — Thorin Oakenshield fic pt 11 MAY BE SPOILERS

Published: 2013-01-24 04:56:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 1710; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 7
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Description Radagast took off on his rabbit sled, followed closely by a whole pack of wargs.

Then, we ran.

Out of the woods as fast as our legs could carry us.

My heart was beating so fast, I thought it was going beat right out of my chest.

We ran to a cluster of large rocks.

The wargs ran past us, but one, ridden by an Orc, jumped on the highest rock.

We all stayed very quiet.

Thorin looked over at Kili, and nodded.

Kili took a deep breath, then got his bow ready and shot the unsuspecting Orc.

The warg fell off the rock, and Dwalin and Bifur finished off the deed.


"Run!" Gandalf cried as the other orcs ran after us after hearing the dying cries of their comrade.

We kept running until we were completely surrounded.

As I looked around at the orcs closing in on the company, I pulled out my sword, my legs shaking.

Thorin grabbed my arm and pulled me behind him protectively.

As I hid behind him, Fili yelled "We're surrounded!"

"Kili!" Thorin cried to his nephew, "shoot them!"

Kili obeyed, nailing one Orc right in the forehead.

I heard Dwalin behind me.
"Where's Gandalf?! He's abandoned us!"

My heart dropped. How could he leave us like thi-

"Over here! You fools!" Gandalf appeared behind a rock, then I saw him walk downwards, disappearing.

"Go!" Thorin grabbed me by my arm once again, and we ran to where Gandalf was.

As I got closer I could see the hole.

Thorin threw me down and I slid to meet Gandalf.

One by one, the other dwarves slid down next to me.

"Kili! Run!" I heard the king cry from above.

I heard him tell as he sliced into another warg's neck.

Finally, Kili and Thorin slid down the tunnel.

Once down, we heard the sound of a horn.

I didn't know where it came from. All I could hear was hoof beats and orcs screaming.

An Orc flew down the tunnel and landed on its back, clearly dead.

Thorin leaned over it and pulled out the arrow that took its life.

"Elves!" He threw it down in disgust.

I looked up at the opening of the tunnel once more, but only saw sky.

"I can't see where the pathway leads!" Dwalin said from behind us, "do we follow it or no?"

"Follow it of course!" Bofur replied.

We all trailed after Dwalin further down the tunnel.

Thorin had not let go of my wrist ever since he fell into the passage, and he dragged me along beside him.

His touch sent tingles through my entire body. I followed willingly.

Soon, after traveling through the claustrophobic tunnels, there was an opening.

We all filed out and I saw the most beautiful sight I'd ever seen.

"...but in the common tongue, it's known by another name."

"Rivendell." I heard Bilbo beside me.

After exiting the passageway, Thorin looked down at my wrist he had a firm, but still soft, grip on. He quickly let go. I looked down, blushing.

He turned and spoke to Gandalf.

"This was your plan all along. To seek refuge with our enemy."

"You have no enemies here, Thorin Oakenshield. The only ill will found in the valley is that which you bring yourself."

"Do you think the elves will give our quest their blessing?" Thorin grumbled. "They will try to stop us."

The old wizard smirked. "Of course they will."

I turned back around to look at Rivendell once more.

I couldn't believe it.

We were going to see the elves.
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Comments: 21

SkyBlue008 [2014-01-13 14:47:39 +0000 UTC]

Gaaaaah!!!! I can't wait! More, More, MORE!!!!!

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TallyBaby13 In reply to SkyBlue008 [2014-01-15 06:12:36 +0000 UTC]

There is a part 12 ^^

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SkyBlue008 In reply to TallyBaby13 [2014-01-15 13:28:09 +0000 UTC]

Little kitty thanks you. =3

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ReOfSun [2014-01-02 05:04:28 +0000 UTC]

Ack!! This is the last one so far? Nooooo! I mean I guess I should be glad cuz now I might actually go to sleep, but man alive, please keep these coming! They've become progressively better each time, and I love how you've worked her into the story, it's quite seamless!

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Wolfdemon20 [2013-10-27 20:10:44 +0000 UTC]

MORE? PLEASE!

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dauch [2013-04-07 04:26:18 +0000 UTC]

ERMAHGERD! I LURVE IT!

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ManiacalFreak [2013-03-29 20:05:28 +0000 UTC]

Please tell me you are still writing this?
I'm sitting in the edge of my seat! I can;t wait to read the next chapter!

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hobbitoner [2013-02-16 14:15:52 +0000 UTC]

Every time I finish this story, I tell myself: OK, it was the last time. Get back to work.
But 5 min. later: No! I can't live without Thorin and Scarlet, I must read that again! Aaand again...

I love it! Please, keep going!

(sorry for my English, I'm from Poland )

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TallyBaby13 In reply to hobbitoner [2013-02-16 20:42:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!! I appreciate your kind words so much!!

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SayHelloToTheCamera [2013-01-31 15:59:36 +0000 UTC]

Can't wait for the next one! ^^

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TallyBaby13 In reply to SayHelloToTheCamera [2013-02-01 05:54:46 +0000 UTC]

Should be soon!! I just haven't had time because of school.. But not to worry!!

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SayHelloToTheCamera In reply to TallyBaby13 [2013-02-01 13:10:06 +0000 UTC]

It's okay. ^^ Love these stories

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tiptah52 [2013-01-31 04:36:38 +0000 UTC]

nonononononononononononononononononononononononononononononononononononoononononononono!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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TallyBaby13 In reply to tiptah52 [2013-01-31 14:00:47 +0000 UTC]

Yes... Hehe

Thank you so much for all of your feedback!!

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BunyRock [2013-01-30 19:51:28 +0000 UTC]

Huh o.O no link to the next one ... must read ... need to ... I hope that this is still ongoing (?)
I like this ^^

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TallyBaby13 In reply to BunyRock [2013-01-30 20:41:50 +0000 UTC]

It is still going and I'm glad you like it!!

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BunyRock In reply to TallyBaby13 [2013-01-31 16:49:36 +0000 UTC]

Good to hear else I would have cried ^^

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TallyBaby13 In reply to BunyRock [2013-02-01 05:55:20 +0000 UTC]

Don't cry!!!

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BunyRock In reply to TallyBaby13 [2013-02-01 15:20:17 +0000 UTC]

yeah ... i won't you said that you will continue so I won't ... hopefully

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countytyronelass34 [2013-01-24 11:04:09 +0000 UTC]

Oooo I like

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TallyBaby13 In reply to countytyronelass34 [2013-01-24 13:44:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!!!

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