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Published: 2010-01-06 14:42:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 304; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description SPIDEY!, il shade it in later, what u guys think?
i know line placement is a bit out, but this is my 1st piece using a wacom tablet instead of my usual pen tool stuff, so be kind plz lol
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Comments: 17

lowman-x [2010-01-12 06:37:08 +0000 UTC]

Looking good man. I agree with the head shape and the eye placement comment from above. My only other crit is to bump up the saturation of the colours - they're too washed out.

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Tennasity In reply to lowman-x [2010-01-12 09:49:56 +0000 UTC]

thanks man
yer i know, way too washed out
my gfs like, ....dont u like colour or something??
its way to colourless
il get some more better ones up soon hopefully

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lowman-x In reply to Tennasity [2010-01-12 10:17:22 +0000 UTC]

LOL @ gf

Peter's put his costume through the wash once too often...

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Tennasity In reply to lowman-x [2010-01-12 11:15:50 +0000 UTC]

hahahha lol good 1

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Dom-Dynamite-Murphy [2010-01-08 01:11:25 +0000 UTC]

to be honest man...i really dig this...it has that super stylised look dat you see everywhere now...my on ly ifs about it are wat da peeps pointed out above with da head and logo...other dan that it looks great.....one other thing man....somethin all artists strive ta get is dare own personal style....and ur on the right path with urs....looks awesome man

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Tennasity In reply to Dom-Dynamite-Murphy [2010-01-08 07:02:58 +0000 UTC]

realy?
thanks man
i wasnt sure if ppl would think its toooo Sean galloway style. just thats the way i draw now, i cant get out of it, i look at human anatomy and can see where the muscles come out and join, and when i do it, it turns out like the way cheeks does his art, well, a rough around the job version

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KIRKparrish [2010-01-06 21:18:06 +0000 UTC]

good start man! the one major thing that my eye keep going back to, is the spidey logo on the chest. It seems a little big compared with the proportions you've given him. i don't think it has pinchers either. Remember to keep things simple. Thats something that i struggle with a lot. just something to keep in mind though.

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Tennasity In reply to KIRKparrish [2010-01-08 07:41:36 +0000 UTC]

hey brew.
do u think this is too like cheeks's style?
i just draw all my anatomy liek this, and cant get out of it

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KIRKparrish In reply to Tennasity [2010-01-08 08:49:19 +0000 UTC]

no man. i would say a similarity but its not too much the same. looks good.

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Tennasity In reply to KIRKparrish [2010-01-08 08:59:03 +0000 UTC]

sweet thanks for the honesty man, i dont wnt cheeks to come after me when im a famous cartoonist lol

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KIRKparrish In reply to Tennasity [2010-01-08 09:00:59 +0000 UTC]

haha, yeah unless he wants to collaborate ideas. then it would be alll good.

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Tennasity In reply to KIRKparrish [2010-01-08 09:02:14 +0000 UTC]

haha sweet

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Tennasity In reply to KIRKparrish [2010-01-07 06:09:56 +0000 UTC]

true man, yer i need to keep stuff simple dont i, il remember that, thanks man. i still got mysterio and vulture i havnt put up yet

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KIRKparrish In reply to Tennasity [2010-01-07 07:58:27 +0000 UTC]

right on man. I'm doin a surf pic at the moment cuz its been a while. then im gonna get to your pic next

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Tennasity In reply to KIRKparrish [2010-01-07 16:16:29 +0000 UTC]

wicked thanks man, yer im gan chek ur pic out now, hold up lol

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SmittyDraws [2010-01-06 19:21:25 +0000 UTC]

Nice!
If I may, his eyes and head seems a bit off, almost like the shape of his head would leave him looking directly forward but you placed the eyes and pattern of his suit off to the left.

Nice work though!

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Tennasity In reply to SmittyDraws [2010-01-06 19:39:42 +0000 UTC]

i thoguht that to.. lol

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