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Published: 2013-09-23 17:07:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 2171; Favourites: 856; Downloads: 0
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An illustration for Kasukerii-san for her birthday. This is an Original Character and should not be used without my permission or credit. Thank you.Here is a timelapse : www.youtube.com/watch?v=x_z4CEβ¦
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This is way too cute from head to toe. I do like it but i do see many things that could be improved on.
lets start with the colors, sadly they're rather fla, especially her skin, its like one tone only, when really skin has more than one.
Proportions wise she is good, i measured about 7 1/2 heads tall, which is a normal adult height although I will point out that her feet are pretty big (not that I'm complaining XD) a normal foot is about the size or a lil smaller than the head is tall, just a little advice to add in there. and speaking of the head, there is also only one other thing i'd ask for improvement is when hair goes over the eye or eyelas/eyebrow, its should be covered still, eyelashes do not go in front of hair when the hair is supposed to cover it (sorry its just a humongous pet peeve of mine i see in a lot of anime style drawings and it drives me nuts XP)
All in all its nice but sketchy, it definitely coulda used some more shades like it does on her shoulder and base of the arm, but for the most part it looks only half finished. Its still a good try to say the least, keep up the good work anyways
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I appreciate the constructive criticism. Β I agree with all your points and comments, currently learning how to paint with depth. Β This is my first full color attempt so I was a bit nervous haha. Β
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yea
i know ow you feel, i cannot color or draw digitally all that well myself I'm better at traditional
but anywyas also thanks for letting it into my group as well
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this artwork is very creative! the perspectives are accurate, and the colours you've used for this piece is amazing and it fits very well. You've made the skin colour light so the hair and the shirt + skirt can stand outa bit more. greatjob
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I think this artwork is very unique in it's way. I love those cute little ears that stick out of the hair. And I love the girls black clothes, I just wonder what software you used to draw this artwork. Please make more!
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# oh my... i like the angle of this picture, it is sexy but not overboard 
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#The pose is really lovely but i think this drawing need more to be really beautiful.
First she really need a lot of shading, that looks flat, too bad, she's so cute ! And a little more
colored skin she looks a little sick x3'
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