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Published: 2011-09-09 21:44:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 3018; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 15
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So, it took a little time because as I have explained on my jornal, lately I have the will of a dead rat.
Blame Meredith.

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This is a fan comic based on the Bioware's videogame "Dragon Age: Origins" and expansions.
All characters and characters design except those not fitting the game belongs to Bioware, Ewan is designed on a customizable Player Character so he doesn't belong to anyone but as concept to me, the story is mine so it's not official, no copyright infringement is intended so don't bother me about it.
Dragon Age: Origins, Dragon Age: Awakening & Dragon Age II © BioWare 2009 - 2011
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Comments: 50

whiteshaix [2011-09-15 13:25:18 +0000 UTC]

Ah ah... Forza elfa!!!

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Alsi-Margaret [2011-09-13 04:37:52 +0000 UTC]

Eloise is now my favorite person, ever.

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bukittyan [2011-09-12 17:32:16 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah; go Eloise!

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tmjay10 [2011-09-11 11:08:54 +0000 UTC]

i read though this comic like cutting butter sooo good
i have yet sliced through the bread so if u pleease update soon
i would be thankful [link]

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Abadir In reply to tmjay10 [2011-09-11 12:30:23 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I'm glad you like it.
Unfortunately it's a period I'm not able to focus on it, but I'll try my best

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A-Redheads-Ramblings [2011-09-10 08:38:45 +0000 UTC]

Okay so it's not setting her on fire but this is good too

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Abadir In reply to A-Redheads-Ramblings [2011-09-10 15:56:33 +0000 UTC]

Stonefist is better sometimes
(Fireball is not that good when friendly fire is on )

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A-Redheads-Ramblings In reply to Abadir [2011-09-10 16:01:22 +0000 UTC]

Considering every mage, templar and dwarf talks about how much lyrium burns, I think Lily might wish for Stone Fist

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gwpe [2011-09-10 05:35:53 +0000 UTC]

Go, Eloise!!



And I love how she looks in the first and fourth panels -- the expressions are amazing!

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Abadir In reply to gwpe [2011-09-10 06:27:56 +0000 UTC]

Yes, she turned out pretty good in those panels

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RosettaBlack [2011-09-10 03:22:43 +0000 UTC]

it it pathetic that i saw this page and decided to read all the other 5 chapters all in one night?



cuz i did....

this is... an.... AMAZING seriesss!!! amazing!

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Abadir In reply to RosettaBlack [2011-09-10 06:33:47 +0000 UTC]

whoops. That wasn't intetional. (but effective )
Thank you

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RosettaBlack In reply to Abadir [2011-09-10 16:48:16 +0000 UTC]

welcome! i really love all the plot twists and how you managed to seamlessly bring all these characters together! its really impressive!

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Abadir In reply to RosettaBlack [2011-09-10 16:50:29 +0000 UTC]

I took me 3 chapters to do that...

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RosettaBlack In reply to Abadir [2011-09-10 17:29:24 +0000 UTC]

it is still impressive! you make it seem so put together! being a writer, i can relate to how hard that is!

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ZizunaChan [2011-09-10 00:28:20 +0000 UTC]

Pride demons are so fun to write, because they're just complete ego-maniacal bullshit.
Yay pride demons.

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Abadir In reply to ZizunaChan [2011-09-10 06:32:57 +0000 UTC]

It's not a pride demon

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ZizunaChan In reply to Abadir [2011-09-10 17:09:58 +0000 UTC]

Oh, well,
Pride demons are still fun.

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TwilightHellsong [2011-09-10 00:16:47 +0000 UTC]

Eloise, middle panel, the badass most players' female characters aspire to be. Hmm... And then...drowning Lily with that lyrium? It's creative...though probably not efficient, unless she has something sneaky up her sleeves - her billowing, open sleeves (is that the Tevinter robe ala DA2?).

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Abadir In reply to TwilightHellsong [2011-09-10 06:29:33 +0000 UTC]

No, Wynne's concept à la DAO

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TwilightHellsong In reply to Abadir [2011-09-11 19:14:27 +0000 UTC]

Ah. Looks awesome either way.

But if there's something both games have taught me, it's don't piss off the elves. They have anger issues and they will hurt you Lily...apparently forgot that lesson, eh?

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Dreaming-in-Shadow [2011-09-09 23:38:07 +0000 UTC]

...I... I'm not sure whether I want to laugh or scream and run in fear when I look at Lily. Because for starters, she's terrifying, and secondly, that is what I say most mornings ("You should run in fear" or something along those lines) when my mother drags me away from my bed and forces me to go to college. Purple-eyed psycho-grin and all.

Also, I wish I could marry Eloise, because... because her awesomeness is so completely kick-ass that it defies all description.
Also, despite being completely pissed off, she looks gorgeous in this page.

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Snow-Wolfos [2011-09-09 22:44:34 +0000 UTC]

Eloise's facial expression in panel 2 totally made my day, she looks so unamused I also really like how panel 4 turned out

I'm looking forward to the next page

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Abadir In reply to Snow-Wolfos [2011-09-09 22:46:07 +0000 UTC]

Yes, it's like "Keep talking, b**ch, Im gonna kick you so hard that you have to pulla finger in you ear to scratch your ass..."

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Snow-Wolfos In reply to Abadir [2011-09-10 00:28:44 +0000 UTC]

xD

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tyrna [2011-09-09 22:25:24 +0000 UTC]

Get her, Eloise! Show that Templar/Demon/bitch who's boss!

Page was worth the wait.

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Leonar-Cousland [2011-09-09 22:16:44 +0000 UTC]

CAT FIGHT!!!!!
HELL YEAH!!!!!
I bet she has been waiting for this chance along time ago.

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Abadir In reply to Leonar-Cousland [2011-09-09 22:44:26 +0000 UTC]

CATFIGHT FTW!!!
And yes, I think she was waiting for this since Jowan said "this is Lily..."
Eloise disapproves -45

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Leonar-Cousland In reply to Abadir [2011-09-09 22:46:36 +0000 UTC]

YES KICK HER SORRY ASS ELOISE!!!!
This should be good.
*pulls lawn chair and popcorn to watch fight*

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victricia [2011-09-09 21:54:40 +0000 UTC]

lolwut Eloise? Well, that's badass ^^

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Abadir In reply to victricia [2011-09-09 21:58:21 +0000 UTC]

The girl is up to something...

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victricia In reply to Abadir [2011-09-09 22:17:41 +0000 UTC]

Apparently XD

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Blueberry-me [2011-09-09 21:52:52 +0000 UTC]

YOU TELL HER, ELOISE!!

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Abadir In reply to Blueberry-me [2011-09-09 21:59:10 +0000 UTC]

Fat cow with lyrium.
Traditional fereldan meal.

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Blueberry-me In reply to Abadir [2011-09-09 23:15:02 +0000 UTC]

xD At least for the mages like Eloise, no?

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emedeme [2011-09-09 21:51:04 +0000 UTC]

First: UPDATEEEEEEEE!!

Now.

YEAH THAT'S RIGHT. COME ON ELOISE!! SHOW HER WHO'S ALPHA!!!

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Abadir In reply to emedeme [2011-09-09 21:58:33 +0000 UTC]

YEAH!

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emedeme In reply to Abadir [2011-09-09 22:29:35 +0000 UTC]

Also. I like Eloise very much on the 4th panel.

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Abadir In reply to emedeme [2011-09-09 22:48:00 +0000 UTC]

Me too. I have finally learned how to draw her.
(now I just have to learn to draw cullen's hair and I can die happy )

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emedeme In reply to Abadir [2011-09-09 23:11:45 +0000 UTC]

Cullen's hair?

Just make him bald and don't worry anymore. Ohohoho....I don't know how his haired survived after the frying incidents anyway XD

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Abadir In reply to emedeme [2011-09-09 23:13:52 +0000 UTC]

Another frying scene and I can draw him aphro...

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emedeme In reply to Abadir [2011-09-10 00:00:43 +0000 UTC]

WOULD YOU? really? :'D

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Abadir In reply to emedeme [2011-09-10 06:39:29 +0000 UTC]

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DemeterAnna [2011-09-09 21:47:57 +0000 UTC]

Eloise: Take it! TAKE IT! D< I DARE YOU!!! D<

...Lily in second panel looks like me in the morning. ._.

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Abadir In reply to DemeterAnna [2011-09-09 21:49:19 +0000 UTC]

...with crazy look and purple eyes?

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DemeterAnna In reply to Abadir [2011-09-09 21:53:15 +0000 UTC]

When dragged against my will out of my bed, yes.


...I value my sleep. STFU -^-

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Abadir In reply to DemeterAnna [2011-09-09 22:00:15 +0000 UTC]

Yes, it happens to me also

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DemeterAnna In reply to Abadir [2011-09-09 22:10:28 +0000 UTC]

(HISSSSS D<)

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SoniaCarreras [2011-09-09 21:47:50 +0000 UTC]

Badass Eloise FTW! and

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Abadir In reply to SoniaCarreras [2011-09-09 21:48:32 +0000 UTC]

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