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Published: 2019-01-11 01:57:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 190; Favourites: 41; Downloads: 0
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Description 1st no i didn't forget

2nd yes i am an irresponsible prick, sorry :'')

anyways-- i tried some stuff with the eyes??? probably won't keep that style i was just-- e xpe ri ment tin g w OW
im sorry if this looks horrible :'' i haven't been feeling good since some stuff happened and such-- i'm doing my best to recover so that i'm on my best state around here-- i apologize yet again if this is too bad :'')

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Thaneinthorne [2019-01-11 02:03:42 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


Here we go-
I love the shading on this! It looks lovely, only thing is I kinda can't tell where the light is coming from, from some parts it looks like it's coming from in front of them and others it looks to be coming from their left (right for us oof)
The colors are great and I have no complaints about them, they're really pleasing to look at!
I don't know if it's just a stylistic choice (if it is, ignore this entire section-) but the eyes are really weird to me. I get having one or two little dots in there but having fo many looks really strange. I usually associate more dots at higher opacity with a character who's crying or on the verge of it, but that's clearly not what's happening here. Maybe turn down the opacity or down the number of dots? (Not both but either I assume could help-)
Overall despite any critique, I give I love the look of this drawing and can tell how much effort went into it. You did a great job uwu

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AboutTired In reply to Thaneinthorne [2019-01-11 02:13:29 +0000 UTC]

aaaa thank you so much for your time yvy <3333

im not very good with light sources and i'm willing to practice on them uvu but i'm most definitely aware it's noticeable i can't define light sources quite yet-- i'm glad you noticed ;v;
i'm glad you think the colors look ok yvy
mhm, as i said in the description i reaaaly wanted to try something different yvy i ddin't quite like how they turned out so i most likely won't be doing eyes this way in the future-- thank you so much for pointing it out!! i'll work on a way to improve on it in the future~
eeeeee i'm glad you like it ;v; <33 i'm flattered to hear so and that you took some time to give me a critique <3 thank you so much yet again <3

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Thaneinthorne In reply to AboutTired [2019-01-11 02:14:58 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! I'm a weirdo that always gets excited when I can critique because I can gush over my favorite parts and share my thoughts lol.
It's no problem uwu I can't wait to see what you make next!

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AboutTired In reply to Thaneinthorne [2019-01-11 02:16:23 +0000 UTC]

pfff that sounds like a great hobby if you ask me uvu
aa thank you for your kind words and support ywy your critique helped me a lot to get around some things!!

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Thaneinthorne In reply to AboutTired [2019-01-11 02:17:45 +0000 UTC]

A useful but strange hobby in my mind
I'll continue to support you! You have lovely art TwT (Plus I'm learning a whole bunch maybe I can lISTEN TO MY OWN ADVICE)

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AboutTired In reply to Thaneinthorne [2019-01-11 19:52:51 +0000 UTC]

pretty much yvy
and aww ;w; i'm glad you think soo-- and it's ok yvy it's never easy to listen to your own advise the way you listen to tips from other's :'')

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tehwatcher [2019-01-11 07:55:31 +0000 UTC]

1st his a cutie

2nd fantastic work

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AboutTired In reply to tehwatcher [2019-01-11 09:11:13 +0000 UTC]

yeah yvy and thank you so so much <333

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QuarniluZ [2019-01-11 06:54:11 +0000 UTC]

OMGGGGG
The truth is I almost forgot that I have more than 1 prize...

This really surprise me at first from previous prize I've got -- your style change a lot!
But yeah, it's still make me *heart attack*

I love everything especially the eyes, it's glitter and it draw me   

THANK YOU AWWWWWWWW ILUVYOUUUU


 

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AboutTired In reply to QuarniluZ [2019-01-11 09:10:48 +0000 UTC]

hng i don't blame you :'' im so sorry i got late like this--

aha :'') ig it has-- tho the last one had a better and more defined scenario i loved to draw your oc all the same <33
and pff im glad :''

aww im so glad you do-- this is probably gonna be my only drawing with eyes like this so i was afraid u wouldn't like it yvy

any time <3333

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99SamPanda99 [2019-01-11 02:56:23 +0000 UTC]

the eyes look really nice imo!

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AboutTired In reply to 99SamPanda99 [2019-01-11 02:59:53 +0000 UTC]

im glad you think so yvy i took inspiration from a tutorial-- but i didnt use the tutorial since its only halfway done :'') i basically gave up--

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99SamPanda99 In reply to AboutTired [2019-01-11 03:00:09 +0000 UTC]

oof i can relate--

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AboutTired In reply to 99SamPanda99 [2019-01-11 07:50:16 +0000 UTC]

aha xdd

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