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AbsurdGenius — The Beginning of Winter

Published: 2012-01-15 09:04:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 408; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 0
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Description I think I'm getting closer and closer to nailing the human anatomy.
I think her upper body looks quite awkward.
I like the way this turned out overall, however I wish I could find a better way to do the grass because it looks hideous. D:
Anyway, hope you enjoy!
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Comments: 4

nothercloth [2012-01-15 09:55:43 +0000 UTC]

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This is really good ,you are right the upper body looks a little awkward, but only because the lower body is actually the awkward one and they don't match up other that that, the grass is not that bad, and the coloring is awesome, the design is good, the shoes were perfect the snow is a bit odd, the background is impressive,although the mountain seem a little close, the clouds are perfect, the dirt looked good, although there is a bit of a perspective problem,most of the actual character is good even though the hand seems a little bit thick.
overall good job

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AbsurdGenius In reply to nothercloth [2012-01-15 10:03:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much for taking the time to critique my art.
Yeah, I do have to agree with you there is a bit of a perspective problem looking at it now.
I've been trying to work on improve my background and it seems as though I still need a LOT of practice.
I guess I do need to make a couple of tweaks to the body proportions, thanks for pointing out those problems.
Thanks again! (:

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shademist030 [2012-01-15 09:08:48 +0000 UTC]

omg, amazing, you keep on improving don't you

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AbsurdGenius In reply to shademist030 [2012-01-15 09:09:30 +0000 UTC]

Awww, thanks!

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