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wyslet [2009-08-18 16:55:16 +0000 UTC]
hmmm wow no comments huh? all those slackers who fav' without a mention!
This is a pretty interesting series. a small, red, wood heart (which is totally cool, by the way) in some black and white hands. Good natural lighting, strong use of shapes and color. It's really a very good shot!
my recommendations would be to add a light to the heart, so it stands out of the hand a bit. you could do that in camera or if you wanted it wouldn't be too hard in photoshop (if that's what you use ) and then, but this is just personal preference, maybe even a little more contrast! but I dunno, that might look a little ridiculous
really cool, simple idea, well shown by an excellent photographer keep it up! don't let those noncommenters discourage you
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AceOfHearts23 In reply to wyslet [2009-08-20 17:01:28 +0000 UTC]
thanks for the mini critique! I will try adding even more contrast and see what it looks like, but what do you mean by adding light to the heart? Do you mean to brighten it or to make the colour brighter to make it stand out? xD
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AceOfHearts23 In reply to wyslet [2009-08-21 11:22:37 +0000 UTC]
Is this better? I tried brightening it but gave up so I did contrast and saturation instead
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