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Published: 2013-06-05 22:00:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 1956; Favourites: 103; Downloads: 62
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Description A birthday gift for ~JedielDaniel
I figured that he'll get a bunch of gifts and most of them will be pictures of his OC, who is probably the most frequently drawn OC of all the people I know.
So here's a picture of Trixie instead.
Happy Birthday dude!
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Comments: 23

Inciatus [2013-06-06 05:11:49 +0000 UTC]

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Very nicely done.

I love your use of shadows to give dimension and especially on the curtain and her cape.

I like the style making her look more equine. However, that being said, the fetlock joint looks very strange and you would probably have been better off omitting it.

Some of the shadows are still off. The cape shouldn't be nearly as bright because of the shadow and the angle the light is hitting it and her chest should be quite a bit brighter for the same reason.

I really like how you did the mane creating flows and frays rather than hard lines.

The only other thing, and this is me just being nitpicky, is the floorboards. The look like they come off at 45 degrees to the curtain and I feel like that would create an odd stage.

Very good job, keep up the good work,
Inciatus

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Adalbertus In reply to Inciatus [2013-06-06 19:56:00 +0000 UTC]

I'm still refining my style of drawing those joints, but I kinda like having them there to be honest
as for shadows, I totally agree that there should be more contrast on her cape and body. Sadly I only see that when people point that to me. Maybe I'll learn it one day
floor... again, you're probably right... actually, the floor is ok, the curtain is wrong, but that's just a detail... that's what I get for not following initial sketch lines
Thank you so much for the critique, it's appreciated

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Inciatus In reply to Adalbertus [2013-06-06 20:23:49 +0000 UTC]

Probably the easiest way is to show the fetlock having both sides so there is an indent on the other side of the leg. Also the back of the hooves shouldn't cross so far across the line on the fetlock.

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Adalbertus In reply to Inciatus [2013-06-09 22:29:45 +0000 UTC]

I'll try to work on that

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TheDigoDragon [2013-12-02 02:03:42 +0000 UTC]

Very pretty. You really did nice work on those roses.

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Adalbertus In reply to TheDigoDragon [2013-12-02 10:32:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you kind sir

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Barrfind [2013-06-06 15:05:16 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, Happy Birthday!
Amazing art.

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Adalbertus In reply to Barrfind [2013-06-06 19:56:49 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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stringtheory00 [2013-06-06 14:37:19 +0000 UTC]

Amazing!

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Adalbertus In reply to stringtheory00 [2013-06-06 19:57:15 +0000 UTC]

yay!

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monere-lluvia [2013-06-06 11:33:19 +0000 UTC]

Wszystko mi siΔ™ tutaj podoba chociaΕΌ nie znoszΔ™ Trixie : D

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Adalbertus In reply to monere-lluvia [2013-06-06 19:59:07 +0000 UTC]

yay!
a nawet podwΓ³jne yay! skoro podoba Ci siΔ™ obrazek z kucem, ktΓ³rego nie lubisz

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Dgs-Krieger [2013-06-06 08:55:57 +0000 UTC]

Really good ^^ +1 For the roses. They are hard to draw.

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Adalbertus In reply to Dgs-Krieger [2013-06-06 19:57:57 +0000 UTC]

nah, I just made rose-shaped blobs

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Dgs-Krieger In reply to Adalbertus [2013-06-06 23:41:16 +0000 UTC]

Close enought. More that I can do, anyways.

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mariobros64 [2013-06-06 02:43:40 +0000 UTC]

a Great and powerful drawing

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JedielDaniel [2013-06-05 22:22:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank You Adi! Thank You so much!!!
.. I mean: "manhug:, yeah... exactly
I really appreciate, when people are drawing my OC, but You actually went a step beyond, and draw my favorite character, which was very, very thoughtful of You

And not only that! You see, one of the small things, that made me realize, that there is more to Trixie than just showing off, was, when she used her magic, to make a bouquet of roses... somehow, she for second there acted so gracefully... and here, You draw her surrounded by the red roses, from the audience, on the stage, like a real respected magician.
This art is just a which coming true for me
Thank You Adi! Thank You so much!!!

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Adalbertus In reply to JedielDaniel [2013-06-05 22:33:18 +0000 UTC]

I knew you'll like it

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JedielDaniel In reply to Adalbertus [2013-06-05 22:37:28 +0000 UTC]

And You were not mistaken ^_^

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Adalbertus In reply to JedielDaniel [2013-06-06 20:04:39 +0000 UTC]

I rarely am






and as I suspected, you got a lot of Jediels but only one Trixie

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Shaleclaw [2013-06-05 22:07:49 +0000 UTC]

Looks like her performance has gone over decidedly better than the one in Ponyville!

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Adalbertus In reply to Shaleclaw [2013-06-05 22:33:31 +0000 UTC]

much, much better

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ThePonyMistSwirl [2013-06-05 22:01:11 +0000 UTC]

YESH

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