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AdamWarren — IRON MAN no. 3, page 15 layout
Published: 2007-03-07 20:27:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 7047; Favourites: 36; Downloads: 477
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SPOILER ALERT! SPOILER ALERT! SPOILER ALERT!The last installment of an excerpt of my layout pages from IRON MAN: HYPERVELOCITY #3... If possible, read the actual, published issue first, which features pretty, pretty art by Brian Denham* with sweet colors by Guru eFX, and hits the stands today (March 7, '07).
One of the major differences between layouts and final book involved the dialogue spoken by viral avatar "Absynthe," here... Originally, she continually addressed Tony Stark 2.0 in a highly degrading and oversexualized manner; needless to say, I had to tone down her dialogue a LOT for the printed page. Oops!
"What do you mean, I can't have her repeatedly refer to Tony Stark as being a 'slut'? That'd be an improvement over what most comics fans were calling him during CIVIL WAR...!" I didn't even TRY to keep in the line where she tells Tony that she's gonna, quote, "cyber-rape you into a wet smear of random data." Oh, well.
*You can see some finished pages from the miniseries at Brian's DA page, at: [link]
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I can see the shadow of an "S" under the second redaction. Do you actually write the bad words under those black bars?
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As if I needed any reason to like the Iron Man comic series; you just gave me yet another one!
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third and last panels are just great!
I will wait to see the full story!
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Damn, I love that line---"promiscuous little playboytoy."
Gorgeous lines as always---I love the messy quality to them.
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