Comments: 8
Shadow-of-Thanatos [2009-02-23 16:26:18 +0000 UTC]
hmm. i don't find it all that hot. but i do like the internal struggles of naruto.
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baronvonvoe [2009-02-23 05:27:01 +0000 UTC]
You've done a lot better with this one, the pacing is well done and the story flows well. There were only few spots were I found mistakes but nothing major. Overall this is an excellent update with good flow and a tight story, good job.
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Adaron1912 In reply to MasterBroly [2009-02-23 02:12:24 +0000 UTC]
lol yeah that was a funny scene to write
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NaruAngel8302 [2009-02-23 01:33:13 +0000 UTC]
omg that was hottest chapter ever. the whole thing rocked and naruto fightin his urges that must've been tough.
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Adaron1912 In reply to NaruAngel8302 [2009-02-23 02:11:29 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. really the hottest yet, I though ch.5 was the hottest one lol
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Adaron1912 In reply to MasterBroly [2009-02-22 23:43:28 +0000 UTC]
thanks. any part caught your attention...?
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