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Adwi — Perfect Mate - Aesthetics

Published: 2010-02-13 12:05:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 827; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 31
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Description Had the sudden urge to draw my perfect woman - lookswise, that is.
No, I don't want someone who's emo, I just couldn't draw a realistic eye from that angle so I just covered it with hair, hehe.
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Comments: 7

shirua [2010-02-13 15:46:39 +0000 UTC]

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I think there's a lot of room for improvement here. You manage to capture the features of the lady which is good however I feel that the shading is a lil too flat.

I suggest it would be best if you play around with the lighter and darker tones to enhance the 3d feeling of the face and the neck. I feel that the ears is a lil too high up if you judge it through proportion. Try to draw a line from your lower nose to the tip of your bottom ear. You will notice that it's almost at the same length so try judging it for this drawing e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin) - "/>

As for the hair, I think it's good that you have the basic shape however there's a lack of dark and light tones. I feel there's lack of details but at least it's a good start e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile) - "/> However I think that you did a fair job on the eyes pupil and reflection on it.

Here are some tutorials which I think are really helpful (I use them also XD)
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I hope it helps e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile) - "/>

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N4assasinN4 [2010-02-13 12:50:27 +0000 UTC]

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it looks good, but next time you upload
something you bether resize it smaller.
caz know i can see every little detial and that
is a bit ugly when you are drawing hair in this way.
tip for next time:
- resize to smaller
- maby some colors
- add some effect so it gives a bether impact
- also try to draw more of the body,


i hope this can help you. dont take this as bad crituqe,
because your drawing looks great !!! ^^ another good
point is that the hair looks styled. and the earing
gives the fealing that the drawed person is around 22 years old.

nick janse

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JinzouTamashii In reply to N4assasinN4 [2010-02-14 03:08:43 +0000 UTC]

Just look at it, it's nearly flawless in its every execution...

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CyberWarrior97 [2010-02-17 01:46:57 +0000 UTC]

Eh. It's pretty good, but there's still quite a bit of room for improvement.

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Adwi In reply to CyberWarrior97 [2010-02-19 06:45:06 +0000 UTC]

Ah yeah, I know.

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JJ-Hedgic [2010-02-13 20:22:20 +0000 UTC]

Cool, looks nice. Excellent work, m'boy.

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Adwi In reply to JJ-Hedgic [2010-02-14 14:34:42 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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