Comments: 19
KoopaMaker [2019-05-17 21:43:15 +0000 UTC]
Very good! The buildup was good and it ended on a nice cliffhanger.
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light-dragon-of-life [2019-04-10 16:26:46 +0000 UTC]
flying's a bitch
i laughed so hard at that
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TFMaster360 [2018-10-13 00:06:41 +0000 UTC]
Great start so far! I wish my aunt would keep dragon-tf eggs in her storage room XD
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octillic [2017-12-18 06:01:01 +0000 UTC]
Loved it, GreatΒ story!
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juju712 [2017-09-24 00:17:35 +0000 UTC]
It starts classical and interesting but the character development is rather weak compared to the plot development. It is not necessarily bad, depends on how you deal with it next. Also, I mean no offence but the transformation scene was... average. It filled the basic criteria and we understood what happened but it was purely factual, I didn't feel immersed in it.
It feels like a good entertaining story but not like a serious one or a long term project.
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AegeusTheLiterary In reply to xDragonBornYT [2017-09-19 06:39:59 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Also, thanks for the Fave and the Watch. I really appreciate it.
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Yarrix [2017-09-14 08:50:51 +0000 UTC]
Great first chapter. The details are great and well placed. I'm looking forward to your next chapter^^
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Slaving-over-Doom [2017-09-14 04:32:59 +0000 UTC]
Illuminati confirmed: The protagonist is actually Devin Townsend
I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR SO LONG AND I LOOOOOOVE THIS AAAAAAAAAA
DUDE THIS IS AMAZING
I love it!! The details are wonderful!! The transformation sequence was SUBLIMMMME. This reboot of Ashes was INDOMITABLE DUDE
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Slaving-over-Doom In reply to TheLooneyCharboa [2017-09-14 13:36:31 +0000 UTC]
Well I'm not a DIEHARD FAN, but I do really enjoy his music. He's very creative and talented!! :3
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TheLooneyCharboa [2017-09-14 03:42:55 +0000 UTC]
Devin: *destroyes half the house* Whoopsie daisy sorry great aunt Adeline lol my bad! *comedic shrug*
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