Heidifisk [2017-03-01 22:38:54 +0000 UTC]
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This piece of work is actually pretty simple since it is mostly concept art I won't worry too much about the backgrounds but rather the design itself. I like the simple nature of it and how you can get the basic of the character without any dialog. In a way I wouldn't mind a bit more to tell use that she is a nurse outside of the cross on the bag. Still it does tell us everything we need to know, even the heels despite not being the most practical I like it simply due to the style. I can tell what era she is from instantly.
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AetasRazael134 In reply to Heidifisk [2017-03-01 23:36:17 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for your critique! I appreciate your feedback I drew in a style that I wasn't used to, so I'm glad it came across as a simple design, that's something I aimed for (seeing as I usually produce much more detailed pieces).You're right, concept art is quick, so I tried not to take too much time on it due to the nature of my coursework. I do understand about her boots, I reckon I should have made them shorter - I definitely wouldn't want to run in those! Perhaps 'exaggeration' was the theme that came to mind at the time. Or she simply visits people's houses behind the front line. Maybe she's quite short? Perhaps it's all three. I would like to perhaps add extra items in this work, I feel it's a little empty otherwise. Again, thank you for your time
Heidifisk In reply to AetasRazael134 [2017-03-01 23:40:00 +0000 UTC]
I am happy that I was able to help you even if it was just a little.
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Ratchet-Halo [2017-03-01 23:28:30 +0000 UTC]
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AetasRazael134 In reply to Ratchet-Halo [2017-03-01 23:38:08 +0000 UTC]
A character I created for my coursework at college, but I'd like to develop her backstory.
Ratchet-Halo In reply to AetasRazael134 [2017-03-01 23:39:29 +0000 UTC]
AetasRazael134 In reply to Ratchet-Halo [2017-03-01 23:42:54 +0000 UTC]
Hell yes please bro!