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Description ORIGIONAL SCRIPT

MAD HATTER
Oh Frabjous Day! Callou! Callayl
He bursts into an enthusiastic dance of unbridled joy.
ALICE
What's he doing?
CHESHIRE CAT
Futterwacken.
At the end of his dance, the Hatter grabs Alice and kisses her
passionately.
Chessur puts a comforting arm around the disappointed
Mallymkun.

MY SCRIPT
At the end of the futterwhacken Tarrant passionately grabbed the champion of Underland and he kissed her with all of his heart and muchness. Alice nearly screamed at first, but she decided to intwine her hands around his thick head of hair and they began to

I've said it once and I'll say it again, Disney screwed up an ending! In the origional script, after the futterwhacken, Tarrant kisses Alice passionately. I think the origional train of thought that led to this went like this: Tarrant is mad and he is very happy with Alice for restoring the hite queen to power so in his happiness he kisses Alice. Plus Tim Burton is a dark romantic and of course this would come to his mind.

I think that Mallymkun had a thing for Tarrant now. I need to get that thought out of my mind.

A lot of trains of thought came to my mind when drawing this.

Alice: "Tarrant, why can't I use the vorpal sword for anything besides the Jabberwocky?"
Tarrant: "Because I'm going to make out with you after you slay the Jabberwocky, silly girl. Now you don't think that I would allow you to slay me, now would you?"

Mallymkun: *sniffles* "Tarrant...how could you?!"
Chessur: *purrs* I love this hat
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Comments: 31

Scarecrow113 [2013-07-09 03:02:47 +0000 UTC]

You know, in the original script, Alice and Hatter were going to have an all out romance. But they cut it and threw in a shit load of subtext.

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Casey-the-ChessurCat [2013-02-08 11:45:08 +0000 UTC]

(((This is a MUCH better ending, but I think Mallymkun likes Chessur ^.^))

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TimeTravellingCloset [2012-07-26 18:22:10 +0000 UTC]

how dare they cut that!!!i disgree i thank that mallymkun was just really good friends with tarrant like one of those sibling relationships.

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Mad4TheMadHatter [2012-06-06 15:32:16 +0000 UTC]

i think they only cut this out cuz she's 20 something and he's almost 50
i threw a fit when i read the script and found out they cut this scene

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TheGirlIsLost [2011-11-01 06:43:37 +0000 UTC]

Ooh la la! Actually, that kiss finale is EXACTLY what Burton originally planned, but Depp didn't want to because of the age difference. That's why the futterwacken seemed so random.

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NamelessSaint In reply to TheGirlIsLost [2011-12-19 11:38:05 +0000 UTC]

I'm afraid that is not true. Linda Woolverton's script had the kiss scene but Burton did NOT want to do it, neither did Depp. Besides, Alice was not attracted to the Hatter.

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SolangeCookieHead [2011-01-14 18:17:08 +0000 UTC]

Hawwa!!!!!

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LittleHatCat [2011-01-04 15:41:17 +0000 UTC]

Lovely! especially Hatter!

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Molly1002 [2010-12-22 18:03:23 +0000 UTC]

Disney totally screwed up the ending!! She should have stayed in Underland! or atleast kissed him!! -_-

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mizzymarine [2010-08-04 09:55:38 +0000 UTC]

Nawwwwwwww but she seems very muchly surprised.

My AIW Fan Sequel (since the TB Movie ruined the end and I decided to redeem them): [link]

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AnyOtaku [2010-07-03 14:34:32 +0000 UTC]

After I read the first scrip, my eyes started to shine and all I wanted to do was kill the Disney guy who make THE KISS disapear!!!

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Rorelse [2010-06-17 13:18:54 +0000 UTC]

they really should have had that in the film

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DramaNacho66 [2010-06-14 16:08:26 +0000 UTC]

mallywhat'shername the dormouse has strange crushes.

I guess it would have been too cliche if they had kissed, but I'm still really angry(and mad ) and now it seems a cliche if alice blows off wonderland for something in her world. Seriously Alice? And she also fails at the futterwacken.

Awesome pic, though. Chess's loving hat face: <3

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xShadowOfDoubtx [2010-06-09 02:07:26 +0000 UTC]

i agree with the ruined ending, i was extremely dissapointed. but this made it better

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adriana-cullen [2010-06-07 06:37:19 +0000 UTC]

im so that they didnt stick to the original freaking script. i mean, at least film it and put it as a dvd extra or something! that would have given me so much fanart inspiration! Damn you Disney! GAH! *shakes fist at world*

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Uchiha-Naruni [2010-04-28 02:13:47 +0000 UTC]

omg... i love this and your little story for it...

Chess: Oh... sweet hat... sweet... sweet hat....

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XiaNumber14 [2010-04-21 23:12:24 +0000 UTC]

They should have kept that part!!!! Love the pic Spread the original script love!

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after-the-funeral In reply to XiaNumber14 [2010-04-21 23:14:17 +0000 UTC]



Maybe it will be in the deleted scenes on the dvd

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XiaNumber14 In reply to after-the-funeral [2010-04-21 23:21:21 +0000 UTC]

I'm praying for that too.

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TheAngelofHavoc [2010-04-21 13:37:05 +0000 UTC]

Where is everyone getting this info on the original script? I would love to see a copy.

Love this! It made my day. :>

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after-the-funeral In reply to TheAngelofHavoc [2010-04-21 23:01:40 +0000 UTC]

I don't really know. I got it from someone, who got it from someone, who got it from someone's friend...etc.

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kamikazekayti [2010-04-20 15:09:30 +0000 UTC]

Yes! This is awesome!

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Love-Et3rnal [2010-04-19 21:36:32 +0000 UTC]

is that really the line from the original script?! where on earth did you find it?

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after-the-funeral In reply to Love-Et3rnal [2010-04-21 23:02:24 +0000 UTC]

It's one of those deals, it's around the web.

I got it from a deviant, who got it from a friend, who got it from a website, who got it from who knows where.

I'd google it but I'm too lazy.

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Nanukk [2010-04-19 05:49:08 +0000 UTC]

d'aww, beautiful drawing~! I love the colors

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Sierryberry [2010-04-19 05:42:39 +0000 UTC]

hehe, I'm glad to see someone illustrate this scene besides me. XD

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khallure [2010-04-19 03:50:02 +0000 UTC]

Lol, their lips are awkward. CUTSEH XD

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PhantomDreamerLuna [2010-04-18 14:51:16 +0000 UTC]

I've been waiting so long for someone to do this. >< Thank you, thank you, thank you! And it looks just lovely, too. ^^

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TheDarknessWithin12 [2010-04-18 12:39:03 +0000 UTC]

ha ha awesome!

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Mystic-Flame [2010-04-18 10:51:57 +0000 UTC]

Cute! Awesome work

I lol'd at Tarrant's line around the last part of your comment

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animekittynya [2010-04-18 02:05:08 +0000 UTC]

Awwww, cuuuuute~! xD

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