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Published: 2014-09-18 18:44:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 1081; Favourites: 41; Downloads: 0
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so for my 310 deviation I decided to upload my first ever made vectorso tell me what you think give me some honest critics and if you want also something vectored(sfm, gmod) lemme know I am always looking for ways to improve my skills
drawn in adobe illustrator
edited in photoshop.
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So sorry, that was Zippy, he does that when he drinks too much Bonk. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a⦠" width="19" height="19" alt="
Anyways, this looks good so far, just like what Nylten says, more practice. :3
The background needs a higher definition, so it's not going to be that pixelated or blurred.
And, have more versions of Slate drawn here please!!!! I want to see what they look like in a cartooney way! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/m/m⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
For his only visible eye, add a little glint of evil to make him look more intimidating!
The source of light, I can't tell where it's pointing from, but judging from the lighting and shading here, it's coming from the west.
Keep up this work, Agent Slate! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="26" height="18" alt="
~Tigerwarrior13~ (Minecraft)
~Skips~
~Matchstick~
~Zippy~
~Eriksson~
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A pretty well-done piece that really stands out in color. You definitely have the form of the spy as well as the details done, too. This is your first time vectoring so I will go easy on this critique for you (or at least try to).
The flaw that really stands out to me are the pinstripes on his jacket. The seams on his shoulders should be there, thus making the stripes on the arms perpendicular to the ones on his torso. Another thing I'd like to point out is that the clothes are a bit flat. Creases are needing to be added to the elbows, armpits, and maybe even the crotch area (if you study clothing and the motion it has, even on a still model, adding effects and creases will make the picture come more to life). One last thing would be the back-bottom of the coat. Where the hem curves around his hips, it cannot be seen between his legs where the curves are supposed to meet.
Those are the major things needing to be said by me. Remember, the more you practice, the more you'll improve! Great job on this piece and keep up the great work!
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I know you want to make fun and I find it really funny XD
but I want some serious critics on this oneΒ
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Explain thyself?
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How... Just how did you do this!? Doing something like this would take me months, YEARS if what not!
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tracing powers yo!
I made the picture in gmod and traced it in illustrator
it says so in the description
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I don't get the background :3
But well done
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I just took a random tf2 bg and made it blurry on purpose since I wanted the drawing to stand out.
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Yes, is pretty well made!
Also, i think the hoodie is more darker than "reddish"
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but I made it darker :c it's supposed to be brown now
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Oh.
Yes, i see.
Good JooJ!
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