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forty2 [2006-05-09 03:02:44 +0000 UTC]
Absolutely crazy about the line: Oh whisper on me the life that remains. Just loved it.
The pome is great (I'm a bit of a romantic, though you could never detect that from the bloody pomes I write).
And loved your reply to silentskream's comment.
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chochweets [2006-03-17 07:49:41 +0000 UTC]
Superb, absolutely superb. Congratulations!
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aishwaryajain In reply to silentskream [2006-03-04 07:13:06 +0000 UTC]
thanks, tis not melonchony(sp?) at all..tis a love song.. whisper on me means that whatever part of your life is left, gently bestow me with it.. when i see you, i see the ocean filled with the water of your love.. i see love in your eyes bright as the stars that see ur together.. and i can move on forever like this, and i can understand all thats here.. coz the rain is pourin and ive forgotten my pains.. if only you give me the part of your life left..as you fly so high and laugh so gay, take me with you, for the rest of ur day.. for everytime i fight, i fall so i can climb, and when i die, ill not be alone, for your love will accompany me.. so bestow on me the life thats left..
lolz, thats sad?? and np, you got me writing thank you
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