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Name: Eryniell (Original name: Betty Flaske)
Story: Lindoarnad's influentials (...!)

Once upon a time, in a citystate far, far away, an influential man lived. That man was mocked for his size. That man, decided to twist the narrative. He did not lack discipline, nor was he addicted. It was merely the logical conclusion, for someone with so much excess in wealth and power, that his body follows suit. This... useful narrative, once mocked, was repeated by his son, and his son's son, and so forth, until it slowly became accepted, even embraced.

Betty Flaske is the noble daughter, oldest of the Flaske children, which makes her a very important asset to family's goals. As such she must represent their wealth. And were the Flaskes lucky, as the girl packed on pounds just looking at cake. This led to Betty becoming the biggest girl in town by a notable amount, and by more than a few considered to be the most beautiful.

However, Betty herself did not share the views of the city, regarding her size, but by the time she was old enough to consciously against her, she already took a minute just standing up, and her parents expected her to marry the wealthiest family in the city, leading to a collaboration for the benefit of both. It was hard to say no to such an important deal. Thus she grew. She took comfort in books, reading of men and women running on the open plains. Of adventure, and of the miraculous workings of nature. She began to write stories herself, of the elven girl Eryniell, adventures out in the open world, exploring forests, treating with fairies. Fighting with giant scorpions.

One day, her family decided, largely to give in to betty's requests, to have a picnic in a nearby forest. As their immense carriage rolls over the path (not intended for carriages that size) however, bandits attack them. In a spectacular manner the carriage pulls into two separate pieces, to everyone's shock. Her parents and sister sat in the back, and with the carriage split in two they've fallen over, eating dirt. Eryniell sat alone on the other side, the side pulled by the horse, the horse that is only going faster, and faster, and faster, separating her. She's become a hostage of daring bandits, planning to sell her back, as the heir is so very important to any big family in the city. One of the bandits is guarding her. A futile task really, Betty wasn't going anywhere at her size.

However, the guard was a surprising young woman herself. A half-elf named Nyndanshia, who immediately treated the captive like a friend. A weird girl, she seemed unaware that Betty's size was unnatural, and it took minutes of explaining why said size meant Betty couldn't move much at all. And the most surprising thing the half elf didn't understood, was that Betty was a captive. It drove Betty up the wall, as if the elf was trying a fancy new interrogation method, but she finally cracked, and told the half-elf exactly what her situation was. The situation the elf was guarding. The half-elf was appalled by the horrors her companions were causing. They hatched a daring escape together, which almost failed because the elf severely overestimated Betty's estimate of the "couple of steps" she could take. But Nyndanshia's skill with a bow, and paralysis-tipped arrows got them to safety.

Eryniell didn't want to return to the slog of her fattening life however. Perhaps it was the rush of adrenaline, and the separation from her parents to finally push her to live her own life, the way she would want to. She started referring to herself as Eryniell so her parents wouldn't hear about their precious daughter, and together with Nyndanshia, they had a very slow road trip, finally making their way to Lindoarnad by boat, where they began to exersize together. Eryniell lost almost all of her excess weight through sheer determination and absolutely not listening to her half-elven friend when it comes to dinner. This immense weight loss has been both an inspiration and source of anxiety for GarminΓ©, who knows her through their common friend Nyndanshia.

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Man, it's really easy to write about a fat girl losing weight, but then you draw said fat girl and you immediately regret making her lose weight in her story
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Comments: 21

Thickstick22 [2015-10-29 03:31:34 +0000 UTC]

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Elegant yet simple. Refined yet just a little bit slovenly the way her gut hangs somewhat loose and she wears naught on feet but socks and fairly shows her thighs. This is a ssbbw who likes nice things like her chair and her outfit with the impractical sash but also likes to be comfortable. Speaking of the chair, I'd like to see it break; kind of clicheΒ΄ I know, but it's a classic, which I'm a sucker for. Very original. The vision is there as always though it needs color for that extra bit of life your full color of a have. I could easily see this woman inhabiting a world with Garmine and the like.

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kawaiidebu [2017-09-24 15:44:21 +0000 UTC]

Have you done anything with a modern Eryniell? I don't think I've seen her before this poll.

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Aka-FA In reply to kawaiidebu [2017-09-24 15:58:56 +0000 UTC]

This is the only work I've drawn of her, sadly enough. I have some basic plans for her modern iteration, but I feel like first I should drawn Eryniell after she loses that excess weight.

...That feeling is probably why I've never drawn her since.

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kawaiidebu In reply to Aka-FA [2017-09-24 18:25:05 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I can see how that would be difficult. That's part of why I tend to stick wth character's who embrace/decide to be fat or fatter, rather than conflicted, etc. Doing fat stuff with her would probably feel a little untrue to the character or otherwise maybe a little... hmmm, uncomfortable?

But then again, maybe she could have something of a personal awakening, deciding to be okay being slightly larger on her own terms with her partner as a means of overcoming the abuse she suffered while younger?

Not necessary, but just an idea. She's definitely one of your more beautiful characters, imo!

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Aka-FA In reply to kawaiidebu [2017-09-24 22:16:32 +0000 UTC]

Well, if that on its own was difficult for me, I wouldn't be drawing GarminΓ© all the time, haha.
It's more that if I wouldn't draw her fat next, I'd betray a large part of what makes her unique (That she loses weight unlike basically every other OC I have).

Not to mention that some people were hating on learning that she does lose weight from the description, so it just wouldn't be right to draw her fat again at least until I put my words into pictures.

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Sexyflores [2016-11-17 00:54:04 +0000 UTC]

really fat, so sexy

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Justin-1998 [2016-08-03 22:43:54 +0000 UTC]

AwesomeΒ 

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zack916 [2016-03-08 15:06:35 +0000 UTC]

I would be her slave nice story

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DOOM-Knight009 [2015-10-29 16:16:23 +0000 UTC]

How could you...

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Aka-FA In reply to DOOM-Knight009 [2015-10-29 16:30:48 +0000 UTC]

I'm sorry It sounded like a good idea on paper.

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DOOM-Knight009 In reply to Aka-FA [2015-10-29 17:35:00 +0000 UTC]

The "getting fat" part was wonderful. The "losing weight" part was a slap to the face of the people who are interested in the first part.

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Atlya [2015-10-29 06:34:30 +0000 UTC]

Ahah, at least the before picture looks great, right?

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Aka-FA In reply to Atlya [2015-10-29 09:52:04 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you think so, and that there may be many more before pictures.

And maybe about one after picture, just so I won't forget her storyline.

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Atlya In reply to Aka-FA [2015-10-29 10:39:06 +0000 UTC]

Cool

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Cornelius-Slate [2015-10-28 23:20:13 +0000 UTC]

she is huge!

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Aka-FA In reply to Cornelius-Slate [2015-10-28 23:22:39 +0000 UTC]

She's definitely the fattest of all my OCs!

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Cornelius-Slate In reply to Aka-FA [2015-10-28 23:26:09 +0000 UTC]

I know, I notice right away!

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Aka-FA In reply to Cornelius-Slate [2015-10-28 23:46:17 +0000 UTC]

I suppose it's hard not to notice. Her size is kind of a big thing.

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Cornelius-Slate In reply to Aka-FA [2015-10-29 00:40:34 +0000 UTC]

sounds about right to me!

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Fatcatwoman In reply to Cornelius-Slate [2015-11-01 05:18:11 +0000 UTC]

Ya but she loses it all....

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Cornelius-Slate In reply to Fatcatwoman [2015-11-01 09:35:52 +0000 UTC]

that does not bother me that much. I bet she will still be attractive .

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