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AkaiNeko-Chan — FM Club scene RD
Published: 2005-12-28 00:53:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 555; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 34
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...yes.... its been a while.... after recieving advice on the last rough draft i have 'improved it' or I think I improved it... that might just be me... as you can see their arrangement has changed, instead of a head on view its not slanted... and they have no clothes on... but that will be fixed, whether you like it or not.
so please comment PLEASE! I would like to finishe this week right after break's over and I can talk a couple of people into poseing for me cause right now neight Kao or Ken have arms... I have no idea how two people look in this position:
- Kaoru's arm closer to the viewer will be in Kenshin's hair.
-Kenshin's left arm(the one on the same side as kaoru's that in his hair) will be around he waist, but not touching.
-Kenshin's right arm will be on Kaoru's shoulder (you might be able to see the little oval where its suposed to be)
- kaoru's right hand... is somewhere.... I'm gonna ask the posers to decide.... But if you ahve any ideas feel free, please
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XD yesh finish.... I get distracted when I can't make things work, but since the bottom is giving me so much trouble I'm sure I'm jsut going to to the upper bodies so it won't take as long! *hopefully* wish me luck1 and tahkns for looking at it!
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hope it goes better then!!
XD
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yes!!! go better!! it has to go better!! ^^ wishme luck!
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^___^ thankies!! I'll note myself to note you when I post it! thanks for the fun support!
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perhaps a bit of hair on her head blown a bit by his breath? for effect? dunno
looks very good though
wish I could draw like you 
actually I wish I could draw at all, but I like this one very much
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I'm sureyou can draw! apparently according to this one person who I can't remember the name of...
"Children were born knowing art, most of us just forget what art is as we grow"
or somthing like that...
you just have to rediscover the artist within! ^^
I will take that into alot of account I thought something was missing too...
thanks for pointing out the detail! ^^
now Draw!
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so, any chance you may be updating this anytime soon?
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. um.... I got stalled >.<
but I swear after midterms... >.<
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midterms?, hehe good luck on it, hard classes?
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APs everywhere!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! @.@
and thanks!
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Is looking like it's gonna be great. It's also good to see you're alive. I had worried that you had disappeared forever, and there would go one of the few good Kenshin artists I know of. Anywho...I hate you. You always seem to get proportions right. *Looks at most previous works* I'm getting better, but proportions still seem awkward to me. Oh well. This angle works wonderfully. I really can't remember what you're original sketch looked like, but this seems so intimate. Even though they're on a crowded dance floor, they're in their own little world...that sort of thing. Can't wait to see the color scheme. You always color everything so nicely. *Glares at most recent charcoal efferts* Nice to see your work again. Keep drawing.
Sincerely,
Jade Lightning_Wolf
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thanks, its always good to know i'm hated... no, no Joking
I looked at your recent ones... hey while I was gone you didn't do enough!!
>.< there are only two new ones I see.... tsk tsk
but your art is getting much better, I'm not sure about porportions though becaseu your latest one is a head only so... post more!!
your charcoal looks really good very good feel for three demensional effect. I applad you!
oh yeah my pic... I was thinking it looked... too... intemate... that might be the lack of clothing though, yeah...
my old deformed sketch can be viewed in the scraps section if you want to see and give me some comparitive advice? =^.~= oh its good to be back!
now if i could get a hold of my scanner....
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NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NIIIIICE ^__^ kudos most sincere, madam.
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thankies ^^
any advice though? please?
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Hmm, if anything I'd have to say Kenshin's neck area. It looks a little off mechanics-wise. Maybe a thicker neck? I don't know. Beautiful proportions in general.
I have a feeling you're iffy about the whole clothing thing, but I think it doesn't look too intimate. It's appropriate. ^__^
Overall, it's very very very good though. Very, very good.
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lol thanks, iffy about cloths? well yeah... I need to know exactly where they are before I draw them... lol thanks for the advice! ^^
I was trying to make kenshin look like a guy while looking like a short, frail, could-be-mistaken-for-a-girl-kinda-guy...
^^
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