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Published: 2015-04-18 19:18:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 743; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 4
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Here is page one! Omg have I worked so hard to get this to where it is today. And I am so nervous if you all gonna like it or not.Now it's time to start the journey of Senna the hedgehog. if you don't know about her i have a little help here Sennas character description
I can finally show how I see her and how she is and I hope you all gonna love as much as I do.
Do you anything to say about this, please tell me (in a proper manner of course) It's the only way I can improve
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I think you did a good job though~! 
The only misspell I am seeing right now is when she says: "What is this? Glass". It needs an extra 'S' there. Also, were you unable to lower the panel more near the bottom there where the words ran underneath? 
I think this page is a fantastic start! 
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thank you so much. I am happy that you can see there is things that i emphasize more than other, it have really been one of my focus areas. So that means i have succeeded.
Oh thanks for the the helping me there. The panel was supposed to be cover all of it, why is ends up i have no idea (it might have a mind of it's own ) . but now it all fixed so thanks.
Thank you oreanna. Improvement, oh yes i have much better over the time
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Wow this is very well done. Looking forward to the next page
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wow fantastisk, i am glad that you think that. It will take some time before next is ready, but i have started working on it.
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