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Akira-Damian β€” Don't forget about me
Published: 2010-05-04 04:53:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 777; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 6
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Description Don't forget about me. Move away, hide from me, but in the place you are, keep in your mind that I remember you, that I wait for you, that I hold you up in my memory, as the sunshine in my eyes, as the rain's smellΒ Β inside my guts, as the wind's sound, passing away.

Remember that I've been yours, that you've set your home on me, that my entrances and exits were sealed by you, that you have forgotten your dreams upon my carpet. The fire is still burning, the flowers aren't withered yet, and I still have my soul undressed and cold, waiting for your return.

Go away but never forget that I exist, that I'm waiting for you with my lights on; that, even if the moon fails, nights are going to have shine while I have this hope of seeing you again. Look, autumn is coming, hours will fall from the branches and the world will be dyed on fire. Come back and whirl these flames around you. Go away, but come back soon.

Remember that this penumbra hasn't finished yet, that the shadows are cloaking the pictures, that the world is now different, it's not the same that we walked together. Our footprints were already erased by the water, the trail we built is now lost. This penumbra hasn't finished yet, the drizzle hasn't fell yet, the stars still have air to breathe, and we still have time.

Don't forget what is missing. Don't forget that we are incomplete. Don't forget that I need you to be alive. Don't forget about me. Hide from me but remember that I wait for you, that words get old but feelings don't, that you have forgotten your dreams upon my carpet.
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Comments: 14

Coleen18 [2010-05-30 16:26:59 +0000 UTC]

Your wonderful deviation has been featured in the third issue of "Scribbles", a bi-weekly feature of submissions to #Scribblers-Anonymous : [link]

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Akira-Damian In reply to Coleen18 [2010-05-30 18:20:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!!!!!!!!!!

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Coleen18 In reply to Akira-Damian [2010-05-30 18:23:34 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!!

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Arcticwolfhowler [2010-05-19 02:25:46 +0000 UTC]

Your writing is wonderful

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Akira-Damian In reply to Arcticwolfhowler [2010-05-19 02:27:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much... I'm glad somebody liked my writing...
You're very kind...

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Arcticwolfhowler In reply to Akira-Damian [2010-05-19 02:31:21 +0000 UTC]

Not at all. Your words are lyrical and poetic, very pleasant to read. Like a cup of hot tea before bed, very relaxing, you know? I look forward to reading more from you. Consider me inspired.

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Akira-Damian In reply to Arcticwolfhowler [2010-05-19 02:37:09 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!! I'll keep writing, that's part of my life.

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Arcticwolfhowler In reply to Akira-Damian [2010-05-19 02:38:23 +0000 UTC]

Good. Something to look forward to, for sure.

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londonrey [2010-05-04 15:39:22 +0000 UTC]

The second and third stanzas are stunning!! Wow. "and I still have my soul undressed and cold, waiting for your return"-That made me want to cry. Its so sad and sweet...haunting. I love this!

I hope you do keep writing, I promise I'll read it!

<3

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Akira-Damian In reply to londonrey [2010-05-04 17:17:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!!!! I'll keep writing if you're going to read... That's all I want, that the things I write reach other people feelings as they are my own feelings spreaded on paper (or data, in this case).
Thank you, thank you!

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londonrey In reply to Akira-Damian [2010-05-04 18:42:25 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome! Your writing deserves readers!

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Friederike In reply to londonrey [2010-05-06 05:46:35 +0000 UTC]

OMG a fan! >n> -barks-

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salmonella-poisoned [2010-05-04 05:22:29 +0000 UTC]

This is fucking lovely.

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Akira-Damian In reply to salmonella-poisoned [2010-05-04 11:36:25 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thank you very much...

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