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I explained more about this in my last post where it's just the 2023 drawing.

Now let's compare. First of all my anatomy has forgot a lot better. The arm holding the Palm branch is way too long and just cost are to small. Her hands holding the palm branch is also too small and doesn't make much sense in how it's drawn. On her left leg her knee is pointing forward but her foot isn't. (I just realized I draw the feet in the wrong perspective for the 2023 one. That's what I get for copying the pose exactly.) Her hair and skirt stick out way too far.

There's no shading in the hair and the highlights are put haphazardly around. Her freckles are huge and the folds of the clothes make no sense.

Thanks for reading my giant word dump! As you can see I improved a lot in a year. Is there anything you notice wrong with how I drew the 2023 one? Or just things I could improve on?

Description
I explained more about this in my last post where it's just the 2023 drawing.

Now let's compare. First of all my anatomy has forgot a lot better. The arm holding the Palm branch is way too long and just cost are to small. Her hands holding the palm branch is also too small and doesn't make much sense in how it's drawn. On her left leg her knee is pointing forward but her foot isn't. (I just realized I draw the feet in the wrong perspective for the 2023 one. That's what I get for copying the pose exactly.) Her hair and skirt stick out way too far.

There's no shading in the hair and the highlights are put haphazardly around. Her freckles are huge and the folds of the clothes make no sense.

Thanks for reading my giant word dump! As you can see I improved a lot in a year. Is there anything you notice wrong with how I drew the 2023 one? Or just things I could improve on?