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DraconoX [2012-07-11 22:31:54 +0000 UTC]
hm,... Ive got one question: were the dragons who ruled over the adamnant kingom Red Fire dragons...?
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AkityMH In reply to DraconoX [2012-07-11 22:50:39 +0000 UTC]
. . . Your really are not familiar with my DoM series are you?
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DraconoX In reply to AkityMH [2012-07-12 03:27:29 +0000 UTC]
ummm,...no sorry. Heh. ^.=.^U
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AkityMH In reply to DraconoX [2012-07-12 03:33:32 +0000 UTC]
Uh-huh... so what made you think about red dragons and shit?
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DraconoX In reply to AkityMH [2012-07-12 03:42:57 +0000 UTC]
I dont realy know,.... :/
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Shadyserpent269 [2012-06-01 23:50:28 +0000 UTC]
This is by far your best work of literature. It's a shame that he didn't live until modern times, the encounter between him and Hera would be interesting to say the least.
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DraconoX In reply to Shadyserpent269 [2012-07-11 22:34:20 +0000 UTC]
...---Did you just say hera? Was she a White dragoness....?
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AkityMH In reply to Shadyserpent269 [2012-06-02 01:15:51 +0000 UTC]
Could have been. But sadly never happened
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Ravensaurs-Rex [2012-06-01 08:26:44 +0000 UTC]
I can only agree, when I read this I hear the great aged voice of Nighoggr, feel his tendency to ramble a little in his old age, though never to the point that he forgets the topic at hand. I get the feeling that he is a character who will do little in DOM proper, but who's actions will echo through just about everything that is done. Though the old serpent is quickly becoming my favorite monster.
A down right stellar piece of writing this is, my friend.
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AkityMH In reply to Ravensaurs-Rex [2012-06-01 08:55:18 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. I worked hard and very proud~
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Vagrant-Verse [2012-06-01 03:35:30 +0000 UTC]
Writing-wise, this is easily one of your best, it was a distinct voice, the word choices were superb most of the time, and overall your understanding of grammar and structure is much improved. And the world-building this shows is quite fun and open. DOM is quickly becoming its own creature.
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AkityMH In reply to Vagrant-Verse [2012-06-01 03:59:32 +0000 UTC]
Yay! But I owe my new Microsoft word program for the epic writing.
Looking at it now, it could have been longer... if I dare say such blasphemy!
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MapleSamurai [2012-05-31 23:58:50 +0000 UTC]
Dragons have always been my favourite mythological creature, and I'm glad to say you've done them justice in this excellent work. I especially love how how integrated various mythologies together and tied the dragons' history with human civilization's origins and development.
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AkityMH In reply to MapleSamurai [2012-06-01 01:24:51 +0000 UTC]
Yep. All done perfectly in the name of Kaiju, too.
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RenDragonClaw [2012-05-31 22:25:03 +0000 UTC]
This was a very neat introspective of a mythological made kaiju figure. So all the colored sections are mostly dragon territories...interesting.
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AkityMH In reply to RenDragonClaw [2012-06-01 01:24:32 +0000 UTC]
Mostly. Except the Thunder Territory, Yggdrisil, Terra Australis and India.
But I'm gad you like. So much wory went into itt.
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ProfessorCene [2012-05-31 22:11:51 +0000 UTC]
First things first, this has to be your best writing yet. It definitely sounds like Nidhoggr more than it sounds like yourself.
Now, there are so many things in here I can hardly keep track of them. Possible aliens and an eldritch abomination, DoM should get very interesting. As well, I'm going to guess that Stoorworm was the Crypt Dragon carcass mentioned in Len Lugua's profile. It would also appear that the present versions of Phenoraixa and Grimm are still growing, as they don't appear nearly as powerful as described in this reading. I'm also guessing that Fenrir is still very much alive, never found the body and all; same could be true for Thor and the World Serpent.
All in all, this is a very interesting look into the world that you have been crafting. I can't wait to see more.
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AkityMH In reply to ProfessorCene [2012-06-01 01:26:17 +0000 UTC]
mmm your intuition tells right. Stoorworm was the dragon in the ruin of South America.
No, Fenrir is dead. As are most of the Asgard monsters.
Thankies.
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ProfessorCene In reply to AkityMH [2012-06-01 01:29:55 +0000 UTC]
I see. The full story of Ragnarok should be interesting
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