HOME | DD

Akourah β€” Eternal

Published: 2004-04-17 00:34:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 27436; Favourites: 703; Downloads: 9358
Redirect to original
Description I open the door,
there lies an eternity.
A voice calling from the distance,
Whose this voice?
Someone strokes my hair,
Who are you?

Am I shaking?
Arms reach out,
Hold me tight,
Never let go.
Watch over me,
And never let me go.

The darkness devours me,
Don't go away.
This is my shameful desire,
to a heart breaking need.
To press your lips,
Against the wound.
Whisper in my ear,
To numb the pain away.

Everywhere I go I see your face,
You stain the face of others,
they’re masked so I won’t see the reality.

To every question this is my answer,
Free from the pain,
Free from the existence.

As I close my eyes,
There lies an eternity.
Over the distance,
Hearing a calling.

___________________________________

I submitted this poem into my account for a reason. Because it was the one i wrote between eleven or twelve, it was the first i wrote of. The first I wrote of what i fell into. I toke this picture and didn't know how to incorrporate it on the count of i had no meaning for the picture. Besides that my head is melting right now. So i felt i would put in the poem(i will delete the submitted one in my account). I corrected some errors of course, toke out a word or two and added a new last stanza at the bottom. I didn't want to change much in the poem cause it was soemthing i wrote when it first started and it was more of an escape, now its rearranged and its more like a trapped disguised paradise. It may not be clear fully of what all these things i speak about, but i can't help that. I've been limited on the amount of words i speak, so they remain for any way to be grasped.


I could have used a different idea for this but i decided this one. God only knows the truth in it all, if there lies one. And only i lost myself in this all to grasp a hint of it, if i only knew the answers.

Oh and im not supplied with equipment like some others here so please dont complain on the background..

thankyou all for being so dear to me and giving me comments and things to continue.


model myself
photographer myself
process jasc paintshop pro, aged tone, border text.


___________________________



And on that day, That final day, we shall have duties for him. We his dark angels shall take the evil souls down into the inferno as his divine will.
Related content
Comments: 244

greenfeed [2008-03-04 16:23:21 +0000 UTC]

remind me on the painting stile from victoria frances.
greet

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

acide-bubble [2007-12-15 11:22:19 +0000 UTC]

very beautiful

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

HunterOfSolitude [2007-11-02 18:32:30 +0000 UTC]

beautiful!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

Azynia [2007-10-14 02:56:04 +0000 UTC]

Captivating piece!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

rainbow-art [2007-08-12 14:10:46 +0000 UTC]

woww

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

NamelessXXXoblivion [2007-07-22 00:51:34 +0000 UTC]

Hum...

Funny...

My comments don't come to you?

well, anyway...It doesnt matter!

^_^

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

NamelessXXXoblivion [2007-07-22 00:48:12 +0000 UTC]

^_^


WOW...

what a lovely position of angle, I'll get your photo just for me to draw in to my idea and build a new artwork...

farewell...

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

NamelessXXXoblivion [2007-07-21 23:41:02 +0000 UTC]

^_^

Well, I'll get your position, your vision of angle and draw it in to my artworks just to get an ideia!

farewell...

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

pandorasbx65 [2007-07-21 18:54:15 +0000 UTC]

very beautiful, both the poem and art!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

ladywhity [2007-07-21 11:08:05 +0000 UTC]

...i think, i'm that girl...sad..lonely..only one..

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

hotnisfuneral [2007-05-21 08:48:33 +0000 UTC]

oh! I LOVE THIS!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

aionxmagdalene [2007-03-08 00:52:47 +0000 UTC]

Ashes! you look so pretty in this picture! You should wear crowns more often. Like to school! Maybe on hat day...sometime before we graduate. You should wire the crown onto the top of your graduation cap...lol. I'm going to shut up now. I heart you!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Akourah In reply to aionxmagdalene [2007-03-10 14:39:25 +0000 UTC]

I use to freshmen year, but i dont think they would alow it on my graduation cap.hah.

Whens are paitings due for houge-wh0re.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

aionxmagdalene In reply to Akourah [2007-03-10 18:32:12 +0000 UTC]

i think theyre due on monday... maybe....but then again i did remember her mentioning something about thursday. im not sure. ask sunny or something.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Akourah In reply to aionxmagdalene [2007-03-11 15:26:03 +0000 UTC]

oh god sheet. i hope not monday or im skrewed. i did all my notebook. And havent really finished any paitings.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

aionxmagdalene In reply to Akourah [2007-03-11 16:37:02 +0000 UTC]

yeah same here. im leaning more towards thinking its on thursday. but i have two classes with her so i might be mixing up the due dates.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

kzmarch [2007-03-02 09:38:14 +0000 UTC]

What a nice princes

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

SalvadoreDali [2007-02-19 19:32:15 +0000 UTC]

Just beautiful!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

JesusRod [2007-02-16 15:47:11 +0000 UTC]

i love those dresses...is so 18th century...cool picture and composition..

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

Jacks-brokn-heart [2007-01-04 01:49:26 +0000 UTC]

Firstly-love that photo.

Secondly-did you get that dress at Hot Topic?

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

SleepyPrincess [2006-12-13 06:08:32 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful!!!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

littlewitsblueeyes [2006-10-15 13:10:14 +0000 UTC]

Amazing! I'm lost words to describe how I like it!!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

alice---rose [2006-09-18 09:10:11 +0000 UTC]

*steals dress*

I love this.
You did a very good job. (:

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

sorpresa [2006-09-13 13:35:42 +0000 UTC]

this photo exactly doesn't deserve 500+ fav's.. sorry

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Akourah In reply to sorpresa [2006-09-13 19:58:03 +0000 UTC]

I didnt think so either, i think its just the subject matter and the dress people favourited.
Its an old picture.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

Hollowspots [2006-09-07 21:26:43 +0000 UTC]

pretty drss!! I want that!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

Mahrooganie [2006-09-05 05:20:01 +0000 UTC]

Amazing. It's beautiful.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

Restless-Heart [2006-08-30 12:53:24 +0000 UTC]

only awesome

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

rampantstupidity [2006-08-10 00:39:24 +0000 UTC]

Wow... this is awesome! I love this. You do very good photography!

-sigh- I have that dress, but it got too small for me. Kinda makes me sad inside ;(

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1

Akourah In reply to rampantstupidity [2006-08-10 00:50:01 +0000 UTC]

yeah its a little small for me, since i bought it ive ripped it like 3 times.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

Vamp-luv [2006-07-13 18:24:56 +0000 UTC]

Very pretty, I love everything about it.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

brokenHeartedLooser [2006-06-26 16:18:33 +0000 UTC]

the most beautiful i adore this one <3 <3 <3

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

Arborea-Bruyeres [2006-06-24 19:00:26 +0000 UTC]

You have a great talent, this is nice. This is very nice.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

AlternativeEllie [2006-06-07 06:48:23 +0000 UTC]

This is a beautiful picture, it feels so pure and ...just so beautiful!!! I can't wait to see more!

x

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

ghostlytouch [2006-06-03 10:40:34 +0000 UTC]

Perfect!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

Amber13 [2006-05-08 13:42:03 +0000 UTC]

awesome!!! love the poem, and the girl in the pic is gorgeous!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

TheEveningStarLenore [2006-04-26 14:55:24 +0000 UTC]

I can't put into words the extreem beautie of this whole thing.... the picture the poem all of it. it is beautiful

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

TheEveningStarLenore [2006-04-21 13:58:10 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful elegant and sad! What a picture! its wonderfull

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

locked-inmyhead [2006-03-25 23:38:19 +0000 UTC]

The poem is beautifully written and the fact that you originally wrote it at such a young age is amazing. As for the picture - the outfit is... well I can't pick one word to describe it but I like it and wish I owned it. I like the backround it gives off a mysterious vibe... well at least to me it does. Overall it's a great picture and poem!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

anhonestplea [2006-03-12 21:18:59 +0000 UTC]

Phenominal work in both the poetry and your photography. Your a stunning woman. Very well done. Where did you get your dress?

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

basilfaery [2006-02-11 17:28:48 +0000 UTC]

ive got to say, that is a hot picture

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

HellcatVanDamme [2005-11-19 22:57:40 +0000 UTC]

beautiful job and beautiful poem ^^

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

slga [2005-10-23 23:11:10 +0000 UTC]

Very Pretty

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

xweareallthesame [2005-08-12 18:36:41 +0000 UTC]

I was wondering if I could post an edited version of this photo on my deviant site.
I would link you and the origianal photo.
Please let me know if this is ok, thank you.

You're a beautiful girl.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

xweareallthesame [2005-08-12 18:34:47 +0000 UTC]

Hey, I was wondering if I could post an edited version of this picture.
I would link you and give credit to the orginal photo.
Please let me know as soon as you can.
Thank you.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

Savri [2005-07-30 21:59:21 +0000 UTC]

I want to tell you, that not only
is the very outstanding, but it shows
in detail, the title; it shows the crown,
the rings, the longingness of what a woman wants,
but by shooting it B/W, that is where it shows no age,
no time limit to this quest, "Eternal".
very well done
AMM

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

roomie [2005-07-12 14:57:24 +0000 UTC]

ok i love your work and your so gorgeous. who are you & where do you live, i want you now

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

princessyoppy [2005-06-30 03:37:33 +0000 UTC]

very nice! goth yet sweet.

nice dress too!

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

BlueGrrl-deLint [2005-06-04 02:41:30 +0000 UTC]

you are so pretty!!!! I'm like, in love. I swear. I wish i loved like you. But like me, at the same time. Damn....

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 0

RaiyneAmon [2005-05-13 10:26:25 +0000 UTC]

oh holy shit. the most beautiful. I want you... sorry. lovely picture. SO ebautiful. such a sullen pose.. ^_^.. mm wow.

πŸ‘: 0 ⏩: 1


| Next =>