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Description Word Exercise 30.09.02




I
Dream of Silent Houses
In which our souls at rest
Overtly spy upon each other whilst remaining
Sympathetic to each her plight.
Years inside their eyelet of prosperity, where
Never too much undue force extracted
Can erase those cheerful lines etched across, once
Ravishing, now simply tired faces... that remain
Accepting, these years gone, and yet within them
Tend to long through midnight hours, densely,
Inevitiably for lost youth
Callously discarded by the waking of ones' life.
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Comments: 4

alaeth [2002-11-15 02:46:48 +0000 UTC]



idiosyncratic, huh?

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frail [2002-10-30 21:32:58 +0000 UTC]

something you were just "playing with"?

*sigh*

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sans-soleil [2002-10-22 03:46:42 +0000 UTC]

some of your work goes waay above my head. i am ashamed to admit. i have totally missed the point in this one. i like the visuality of the words though. (as you had once said)

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kara [2002-10-20 14:28:13 +0000 UTC]

weee shesss backkkk

very creative,

"Never too much undue force extracted
Can erase those cheerful lines etched across, once
Ravishing, now simply tired faces"

just perfect!

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