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AlanaKai — Dragon Age: Hawke

Published: 2011-04-30 16:49:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 2443; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 68
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This is my mage Hawke (the protagonist from Dragon Age II), Cera. Some thought of their Champion as a fierce avenging angel, while some thought of her as a dangerous apostate, wild with rage against the world. She's cynical, reckless, and full of anger. She loathes both the Chantry for their oppression and other mages for being so weak that they turn to blood magic and other evil arts, forcing the hand of the Templars against them. But I think this picture shows another side of her. After all the loss she faces in Kirkwall, her anger runs out. With a moment's reflection, she wonders: between the ways that people see her - the Champion of Kirkwall, the raging iconoclast and the feared mage - is there any of her left? Does she even know what she was before her anger consumed her? Without it, does anything remain of what she used to be?

EDIT: I love how you give a woman a slightly strong jaw and no make-up and everybody thinks she's a man. Shows how few people read the Artist's Comments before commenting, too. How many times did I call Cera 'her' in the description? Alas.

I like how this turned out, considering it took maybe 2 hours. (That's quick for me!)

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Comments: 65

AlanaKai In reply to ??? [2011-06-09 09:54:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I really appreciate your comment I thought Aveline looked great too, it was refreshing to see a powerfully-built woman to counter Merrill and Isabella's hyper-femme look.

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ArcticFox4 [2011-06-03 01:56:48 +0000 UTC]

Oooooh, she's beautiful. I love her expression, and the facial tattoo looks very well.

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AlanaKai In reply to ArcticFox4 [2011-06-04 15:05:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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gethntysear [2011-05-16 10:12:47 +0000 UTC]

I love how piercing blue the eyes are, and nice brushwork in the hair and tattooing. Very nice detailing

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AlanaKai In reply to gethntysear [2011-05-16 20:33:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for your kind comment

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gethntysear In reply to AlanaKai [2011-05-17 09:50:18 +0000 UTC]

Your very welcome

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dracaena-akira [2011-05-15 17:44:45 +0000 UTC]

STRONG POINTS
= colors: they are very harmonious and complimentary. they approximate natural colors of the skin and hair
= the shape of the face is absolutely nice as well

POINTS to IMPROVE
= the eyes are a bit too small (for me)
= the shading on her right cheek is kind of inappropriate. also of her right nostril. they look to far into her face.

well that's it i hope this will help

but overall this is really nice.

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AlanaKai In reply to dracaena-akira [2011-05-16 20:36:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the detailed comment, I really appreciate your feedback! I think you're right about your critiques, I appreciate them a lot, I'll take it into account later. Thanks

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dracaena-akira In reply to AlanaKai [2011-05-17 04:52:02 +0000 UTC]

sure no problem. I am quite used now to doing detailed critiques. happy to help

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Time-Stop [2011-05-15 14:26:27 +0000 UTC]

This is really neat! I think the nose and the eyes are the best part, the details there are quite well done

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AlanaKai In reply to Time-Stop [2011-05-16 20:37:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Volcano-Queen [2011-05-15 11:26:45 +0000 UTC]


Amazing job on the shading, especially the face and lips. Nice job on the eyes aswell, they look really nice.

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AlanaKai In reply to Volcano-Queen [2011-05-15 12:42:15 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much :')

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TheRainbowTroll [2011-05-14 21:47:50 +0000 UTC]

wow! That is so amazly done

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AlanaKai In reply to TheRainbowTroll [2011-05-15 10:31:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Blue-like-the-Sky [2011-05-12 10:36:24 +0000 UTC]

Very well drawn. One thing, her lips seem a bit wrong for the view of her face? Otherwise it's extreamly well done

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AlanaKai In reply to Blue-like-the-Sky [2011-05-12 16:48:02 +0000 UTC]

Yes, they're far from perfect. Alas. I'm glad you like it, though

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Blue-like-the-Sky In reply to AlanaKai [2011-05-12 16:53:04 +0000 UTC]

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MasterOfUnlocking [2011-05-07 01:19:09 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful work! The colors are gorgeous and her face is wonderfully done. Great job!

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gdpr-14717637 [2011-05-04 23:12:35 +0000 UTC]

Very awesome.
I love all the subtle shading going on here, and the dark colors.

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AlanaKai In reply to gdpr-14717637 [2011-05-05 14:00:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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secretly-broken [2011-05-04 22:41:23 +0000 UTC]

This is really amazing. I don't really have much to offer in terms of constructive criticism. Haha. It's really well done. I like the dark atmosphere of it and how you used a subtle touch of lightness. It really works. Great jov!

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AlanaKai In reply to secretly-broken [2011-05-05 14:00:17 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thank you! That's very kind

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secretly-broken In reply to secretly-broken [2011-05-04 22:41:35 +0000 UTC]

Or job. -_-

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Kappayi [2011-05-04 17:55:55 +0000 UTC]

Great shading, fits the title.

One thing - could make the jaw a bit smaller perhaps?

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AlanaKai In reply to Kappayi [2011-05-05 14:00:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you I'm a bit confused - what dimension do you think that the jaw is too big in? Are you sure it's not just in the range of normal variation between the characteristics of different people, rather than an artistic error? She is intended as a character to have quite a strong jaw.

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Nutrinc [2011-05-02 13:20:34 +0000 UTC]

Very textured.

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MPhilipPhotography [2011-05-02 03:48:46 +0000 UTC]

beautiful use of contrast to make us focus on the characters expression. the shadows, hair, and eyes are extremely well done. great job

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AlanaKai In reply to MPhilipPhotography [2011-05-02 11:27:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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tiffc [2011-05-02 02:15:32 +0000 UTC]

I totally knew it was a woman! lol. And she's very beautiful! I love the subtle shading and the markings on her face. The warm color on her cheeks is very pretty too, and I love how you rendered the top of her cloak. Really lovely work!

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AlanaKai In reply to tiffc [2011-05-02 11:28:42 +0000 UTC]

Awww, thanks I'm glad you could tell that she was a woman, hehe. Quite reassuring.

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Th3-C0unt3ss [2011-05-01 22:38:13 +0000 UTC]

such sadness in her eyes!

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AlanaKai In reply to Th3-C0unt3ss [2011-05-01 22:40:50 +0000 UTC]

She has a lot to be sad about, but she's very strong too

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Ilionej [2011-05-01 17:07:32 +0000 UTC]

Seeing this wonderful work of yours I can't wait to have the game finally in my hands.

2 hours? Wow! You're damn talented. Something like this would take me at least 4 hours.

But this so perfect in shading and colours, I'm really speechless. And the blue eyes seem to glow as well. A very nice contrast to the dark rest.

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AlanaKai In reply to Ilionej [2011-05-01 17:26:40 +0000 UTC]

Awww, thank you I hope you get DA2 soon and enjoy it! I've seen mixed reviews, but I think it's wonderful

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kerrrriix3 [2011-05-01 14:03:03 +0000 UTC]

This came out great! Good Job!

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AlanaKai In reply to kerrrriix3 [2011-05-01 14:06:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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kerrrriix3 In reply to AlanaKai [2011-05-01 14:09:10 +0000 UTC]

NP (:

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Phaaze-Dweller [2011-05-01 13:43:39 +0000 UTC]

wow really nice! but the hair is a little not-hair like

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AlanaKai In reply to Phaaze-Dweller [2011-05-01 13:54:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Can you be more specific what you mean by 'not hair like'?

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Phaaze-Dweller In reply to AlanaKai [2011-05-01 15:06:37 +0000 UTC]

yea! sorry..
umm, well it kinda looks like straw. but there's plenty of great useful hair brushes out there for download thanks for putting up with my comments!

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AlanaKai In reply to Phaaze-Dweller [2011-05-01 15:08:45 +0000 UTC]

Ah ok. Great, thank you!

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Phaaze-Dweller In reply to AlanaKai [2011-05-01 15:15:09 +0000 UTC]

^^ no prob!

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Fighting-for-Nothing [2011-05-01 12:44:05 +0000 UTC]

This is a really fabulous piece. The mood the lighting gives is very solemn but it makes me interested in him. Plus I am sort of a fan of dragon age so. ^^ The skin particularly looks really really nice.
Great work!

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AlanaKai In reply to Fighting-for-Nothing [2011-05-01 13:51:54 +0000 UTC]

Yay, Dragon Age! Thank you for your kind comment.

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LadyDeven [2011-05-01 12:10:43 +0000 UTC]

WOO Dragon age!
And wow piercing blue eyes, they seem almost worried.
Which gives an odd look with how straight his lips are.
And your hair skills are beautifully pic

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AlanaKai In reply to LadyDeven [2011-05-01 13:46:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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WarriorofWolvensoul [2011-05-01 10:10:25 +0000 UTC]

interesting, the lighting is great.. but there's something bothering me about her mouth... can't quiet place it

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AlanaKai In reply to WarriorofWolvensoul [2011-05-01 10:47:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you And yes, you're right, there is something wrong with the mouth, and I've tweaked it and moved it aroun a whole bunch of times, and I just can't figure out precisely what's wrong with it either. It just looks weird. Hopefully if I leave it for a while and come back to it with a fresh eye, I might be able to identify it. But it is frustrating!

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WarriorofWolvensoul In reply to AlanaKai [2011-05-03 23:24:52 +0000 UTC]

Faces are one of the hardest things to draw but i give you credit!

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