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Published: 2010-02-14 18:53:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 1557; Favourites: 38; Downloads: 19
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Tried some new style of detail and perspective. I kind of like the outcome, although the hair still seems a little off, but I don't want to do the trouble fixing it...To Agacross
Heya, if you see this, yes I loved your zelda drawing too much so I had to do a similiar perspective, the hand looks almost the same, the reason is: I couldnt do it another way. I didn't trace it, actually.
I'd like critiques, so just out with everything!
Reason she's got teeths sticking out of her mouth is because she's mutated or something, so no, she's not a vampire!
Edit:
Fixed hair and added a BG! Any thoughts?
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Comments: 34
What a great piece. I love the perspective of hand, as well as the colouring and detail.
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omg lovely colouring!! i love the detail on the dress!!! but her faraway hand looks a bit odd... a little too straight or maybe the shape of the forearm is not convincing enough. and as for the fingers on her close up hand, the proportion is a little off. have the index finger bigger i would say. and maybe add some knuckles sticking out between the fingers. one final thing, her neck seems a bit too far back maybe, move it slightly forward next time and leave some more gap between her neck and her chest.
hope u found this useful!!! i know u hate drawing hands but this is rly good! i doubt i could have done any better!
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Yeah, thank you! I did some fixes, just haven't uploaded it :] I guess I really should pratice drawing hands.
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weee. ur welcome! haven't been talking to u for ages!
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Yeah, just been lazy and busy playing games -.- Too lazy to even post on forums or doing homeworks <_<
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oooo! i love games too!! haha! watcha playing? wat sort of games do u like?
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I play RPGs/MMORPGS and Shooters. Just started playing Allods a few days ago ^_^
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o i LOVE rpgs!! my fav. and hack and slash ones r pretty good as well! but i suck at any type of shooting game...
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heh ^^ Anyway, I don't think I've asked, are you a boy or a girl?
The question just came to mind, not like it matters anyway. But... my guess is.. you're a guy. Seriously I have no idea. OH, I am so sorry if I guessed wrong x_x' or I should be sorry cuz I don't know. Eh, sorry for both <_<
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LOL! y do u think i'm a guy?! don't wry i'm not mad or anthing but i'm a girl. a rather short one too! 
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OH, sorry! =O
Well, you write like a girl, I noticed that, and also some of your drawings showed that. But I randomly typed guy, heh. I am bad at guessing genders, it seems haha 
*Puuh, I'm not getting killed*
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LOL! rly? my art suggest i'm a girl!? how how!? i agree with u tho, from certain drawings u can just tell whether the artist is a guy or girl. but i think girls tend to draw charactes more skinny while guy artists draw manlier or realistic features.
y would i kill u? haha. but i know some girls who hit guys for now particular reason... which i find is pretty annoying... cus they're just attracting attention... i guess i'm more like the quiet and shy type of girl!
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Thank you, glad you think so : ]
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the changes yo made..made a world of difference i like the soft red background and her dress leads somewhere now i love it...the hand doesnt bother me as much anymore too..
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Thank you =]I am glad you liked it!
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im glad you listened and inproved
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.:Returning the Critique:.
Well first off, i like the originality and the colors you decided on the black really brings out her eyes....
now for the improvements..the dress kinda like folds into this blackness..where lighting would and should be on the legs...her fingers should of been more thought out considering they are the biggest things in the picture and in the center...i like the level of detail in the dress..but you should of brought some more to the face...and there's this strand of hair by her nose that just doesn't look right its like a upside down Y and hair does fall like that unless u got a bad haircut...i like the lips...wish i could see a bit more of the teeth though..and this is just to help you in the future.. but the end of the hair looks like you drew then erased with this huge brush with low opacity and it kinda stole away some of the detail that i want to see...p.s. might want to start looking into doing backgrounds as well....but overall i like where you were trying to go with this...
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Thank you ! Suprise, never thought you'd return a critc, thanks once again.
Yes, you're right about everything 
It's great that you are so thorough, and I am looking forward for more of your critiques
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i love this pic and the perspective is quite hard to do, so congrats that u managed to do it right^^
however, her hair seems a bit of 
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Hah, yeah, probably. I'll erase some when I've got the time. Thank you!
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you re most welcome^^
normaly i never do critics as i don't know how ppl react to them, but since u required some...well i think it shows professionalism when one can handle (good) critics^^
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I always welcome critics with open arms =O Critics is gold for an artist, so I dont think you should be afraid giving them.
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haha you re right about it^^ i love them too
but some ppl just don't get it, they hate to be criticised O__O
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True, and it kinda feels wrong to hurt their feelings right? Sometimes I can get really hyper and criticize everything I think that can be improved XD At worst they'd never speak to me again ._.
I've read that the trick giving critics without getting the artist at you is pointing out the things you like first and last, put your critics in the middle.
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ah that's a good adwise thank u^^
(ups, that means i have done it wrong in your case
yeah, i've had such cases as well...even if you try to formulate it as friendly as possible they still can get pissed at you -.-
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i don't know if its cause shes a mutant or something but her hands looks rly choppy in my opinion. also the ends of her hair could be longer and more flowing like the rest of her hair, bug i really loved the drawing all in all
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Heh, Thank you! About the hand, yes I noticed after you mentioned it 
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haha ok lol
well its still great as i said :3
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fantastic shading and color choices, but I think the far hand is a bit small.
and the hair maybe bgs you because it's a little too... thick? it looks a bit... yep, odd... too thick, I think there is just too much hair on her face!
either way, though, it's very fantastic!!
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Thank you =] Yeah, she's got quite much hair ._. hairy bastard XD
I dunno how I could fix it tho, maybe leave more empty space and holes in the hair?
By the way, sorry, I had to finish this before starting on Suou, I'll probably draw her this week! =]
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*looks at fixed version* that is better!!
it's quite alright~ I probably won't have a lot of time until the weekend, anyway. and my tablet went boom D|
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