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alcoholocaustic — An American beauty, she is.
Published: 2010-04-06 04:01:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 620; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 5
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I may not have that cyanide look, drop dead gorgeous.But I'm vain, Truly, I am.
Not that you would ever notice, you were oh so too busy hogging the mirror and pushing me away with your make up covered hands.
Cover it up, but everyone will still see that your cheeks are starting to sag and that those bags under your eyes only get bigger each day.
Not that that it matters much to me.
What do I care if your skin is slowly melting from your soured bones?
Your whole being is rotting.
It's funny really.
Does it hurt much?
I wonder if I pinched you, would your skin fall apart between my fingers?
Would it dissolve and disappear ?
I'd like to tear you apart, to see what makes you rot.
I bet it's that disgusting pride, that which you hold so dear and close to your heart.
How's that working for you dear? How do those palpitations feel?
You twitch in your sleep, and I wonder if it's from nightmares.
I hope you choke on them.
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This is a really nice little essay. You are good, girlie.
Personally, I've never had experience with being vain, but hey...I'm glad I wasn't like those girls (guys can be the same way) that you describe. And trust me, if I was a good writer like you, I would have wrote something similar when I was young...and I'm picturing this one particular girl...grrrr...I'm old and I still don't like her. lol...
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Actually this was about a boy, man.
And thank you.
Lots.
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Doesn't surprise me...
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This is great work, you hate it? Someone would pay for poetry like this.
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I did at the time, I've grown to like it.
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eight months later, Heidi, i ask -
has this catharsis lasted?
was it as nutritious
as it tasted?
did it stay
ingested?
or did the bile return,
did hate regurd,
your throat to burn?
~ ~
this emotional cleansing
amazing to read, and good
in its creation, especially
if it worked.
if it didn't, there is another way.
thanks for the favs,
i hope this is a good year.
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It started shaky, but it has shaken off the bad and revealed it's good worth.
And yes, It helped me release the frustration of being used and forgotten.
Thank you ever so much.
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Great job - a strong and raw piece, with surprising choise of words, too! Keep it up, and don't worry, we write because we have to get the emotions out.
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Yeah, that one was a bit emotional, by bit I mean nuclear, but thank you. I really appreciate it.
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Write because you can.
'If it only matters who corrupted your silver mould,
Will you miss the fact that it was only fools gold?'
Older words of mine [link]
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I like that a lot, and thank you. Again.
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