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indiana-w [2010-01-05 18:38:11 +0000 UTC]
You'll have to forgive all the fav-and-run I am doing, dear Alec. I have more than a hundred deviations in my inbox, around 9 of which are yours xD
The idea that the stanzas somehow interlock was interesting and provided what could be considered a more gratifying read.
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AlecBell In reply to Piscesandthediamonds [2010-01-02 10:09:21 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, Natalie.
This faded opulence was the backdrop to my child hood. There isn't even an X to mark the spot anymore!
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spoems [2010-01-02 05:54:02 +0000 UTC]
haunting and precise, Alec - these objects and their feelings-familiar, perched on the shoulder of our memories, whispering what once was and what could have been.
another extraordinary piece.
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Moon-and-Ash [2010-01-01 21:21:20 +0000 UTC]
That final stanza serves as a gorgeous capstone for the lamenting of impermanence – and how things – unused, unloved – can fall into disrepair. Houses, people. Exquisite.
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TriciaS [2010-01-01 11:59:43 +0000 UTC]
A haunting vision of what was...and is now!
....I love the story you've told ! It's a minature novel...full of history...nostalgia...andsorrow...
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Amberous [2009-12-31 21:32:51 +0000 UTC]
Haunting and powerful. I felt myself imagining derelict mansions of past glory. There is so much promise in things...and then they all fade away.
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AlecBell In reply to Amberous [2010-01-01 01:31:28 +0000 UTC]
I pleased you appreciated the poem.
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Blueskye27 [2009-12-31 19:12:11 +0000 UTC]
Such a sad piece, evocative of how we all must eventually fade. Nicely done, Alec.
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AlecBell In reply to Blueskye27 [2010-01-01 01:30:38 +0000 UTC]
Thanks as always, Cindy.
A topic I seem to return to!
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Trippy4U [2009-12-31 14:06:25 +0000 UTC]
I loved it...it was a nice journey...trip if you will allow..through a visual landscape of memory.
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AlecBell In reply to Trippy4U [2009-12-31 16:27:33 +0000 UTC]
Tahnk you, Richard.
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