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Published: 2018-07-18 00:31:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 298; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 0
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^^Most recent fullbody wolf.ΒThe reference I used:Β sta.sh/01bu8yk7gz9c
I would LOVE critiques on this before I line and color it! Any opinions are highly appreciated! <33
Edit: The muzzle will be shortened
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not bad! the only thing I noticed was the nose is a bit long :3 great work
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#Cubist linework brings a unique style and personality into the fold. Well done
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This is a brilliant wolf drawing! Maybe the nose could do with some proportioning, other than that I think it is a brilliant piece. Your line drawing is very neat and you have excellent detail on the head, especially on the ears! Maybe you could do one with the mouth open so we can see its fangs too. Very good job, well done!
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looks good in terms of proportions
awesome work !
keep it up
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This is great!
Although I think the nose should be bigger.
Wolves have massive noses
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I'll make the nose bigger. Thank you!
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oh my goodness, I love it!! I loved wolves as long as i can remember, and this is the most wonderfully designed wolf i've ever seen in my life! 10 Stars out of 10! I can't wait to see the finished design.
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ahhhh thank you so much! you don't know how much that means to me! <33
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you're most welcome my friend.
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The overall form and composition of your sketch is absolutely beautiful. I love how fluid your lines are - clearly you do well to capture a well informed background on anatomy. One thing I find that might improve your work is that your particular style is not as much realism, and in that case you might need to make more emphasis on the rear of the wolf to demonstrate that the end of its body is further back (i.e. making the end transition from bigger on the left to smaller on the right) in order to solidly demonstrate the difference in space. Another thing that could perhaps improve your piece is adding more form to the right front leg so it is not as straight, since nothing in nature is really straight. Adding ligaments to the legs that are particularly obvious even with fur can even benefit you - if you so choose. Either way, I really do love how you captured the movement of the wolf - practically identical. There are always methods to making the movement more convincing. Hope this helps some, enjoy and good luck!Β
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thank you so much! This will help immensely when I line it! I do plan on adding ligaments and fur, and I will make the form bigger on the left to smaller on the right. <3
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Anytime! Super excited - glad you found it useful!
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If I have any advice to offer it'd be to make the body a bit stockier depending on the species. Assuming you mean to make this a gray wolf, there is a lot more muscle and fur. Other than that, this looks amazing!
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The body shape looks find so far. Maybe make the snout a little shorted but over all it looks very good
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Looks great, but the tail should be a little less fully.Β
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Fluffy, sorryΒ
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Thank you! <3Β
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thank you so much!Β
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