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Alessia-Izzo — Chiara III by-nc-nd

Published: 2014-05-13 17:37:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 1854; Favourites: 72; Downloads: 34
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wite-shrine [2014-05-13 17:49:07 +0000 UTC]

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The shot has a nice composure and setting, but there is one main thing I would consider for your next shot. While the lighting is nice I think that a narrower aperture would be advisable, as with this photo a little too much is out of focus for my tastes. Changing to an aperture of around 3 or 4 would put a little more of the image in focus, while leaving enough of the background soft enough that it wouldn't draw the focus away from your model. Hope I helped/was fair e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

ps I was nine words short of the required length for the critique so I added this ps section haha.

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Brawlio16 [2014-05-14 15:20:20 +0000 UTC]

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Brawlio16 [2014-05-13 23:12:31 +0000 UTC]

this beauty  looks no comment

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danUK86 [2014-05-13 22:10:55 +0000 UTC]

fantastic shot, works great in black and white

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Sadistyk08 [2014-05-13 17:42:23 +0000 UTC]

awesome shot. i like the rough bg with this beauty in front of it. great choice with the saturation and those rich shadows. i also enjoy the mystery of one of her eyes hidden. nice job

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Alessia-Izzo In reply to Sadistyk08 [2014-06-18 11:58:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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Sadistyk08 In reply to Alessia-Izzo [2014-06-18 18:20:25 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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