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Previous: [link] Next: [link]page thirty eight. uhm, I don't remember what it was I was going to write about this one. other than sad rockpaw is insanely cute.
I am now finished with midterms, (actually not really, but the big ones I am) and making some progress on other school work so I think I can justify another page.
um yeah. the background cats are supposed to be white, that's why I didn't ask for cameos.
Enjoy!
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awwww! this page made me cry!! so saddd!!! I luv it tho!!!
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I just finished Crookedstar's Promise, so I'm all, "WAAAAAA, MORE DEAD KITS AND MOTHERS!"
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how about rockheart finally realized he wants to make his apprentice the best ever? like, he finally wants to give eaglepaw what rockheart always wanted, to he tries to compete with the other mentors.
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Maybe Rockpaw could say: "I wish sometimes I never lived.." and then Eaglepaw can come up and say: "Hey Rockheart, um, may I go hunting with the other apprentices?"
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The whole page actually made me cry, 
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I love how you draw! I also love the comics! Keep them coming!
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omg i feel sooo bad for Rockheart he tried soo hard and his father dident care 
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i am really starting to wonder how you do white outlines on a black background x)
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Your style is awesome at always. 
If there wasn't the problem, that Warriors belong to Erin Hunter and that this here is a fanfiction based on Warriors, I would finally come to the conclusion that you should publish the whole story as a book/manga that you can buy and not only here at DA.
Maybe you should think of something own that you can publish.
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I've been simmering a few ideas for the past few years. I'm using heart of a warrior to test out layout styles and plot execution before I go into something more of my own. plus I've started it, now I have to finish, even if it takes years...
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Is this done by hand? Must've taken a lot of patience 0_o
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White cats= StarClan? It would make sense, since Rockheart seems to have a strong connection with them x3
But goodness! He has a cruddy life ;.;
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not necessarily star clan, although that is an interesting spin. they're just meant to be the clan cats, but kind of removed from rockhearts situation in a way that he feels no connection to them, perhaps even feels hostility from them. (even though if you'll notice I tried to put a couple sympathizers in there...)
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Ah, gotcha 
Yes, and you do a great job with those sympathizers! Make sure you don't go overboard though; too much sympathy for characters will either make them seem weak/pathetic or make the readers not stand hearing about them.
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I sense sarcasm.
but don't you worry, rockheart doesn't get very much sympathy from anyone. not even me.
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No sarcasm! (I don't use sarcasm online because it's so hard to detect sometimes) You really did do great with the sympathizers; I feel horrible for Rockheart right now
And aww, poor guy. D: Still, I don't believe his actions justify what he's been doing to Eaglepaw.
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And I commented about "too much sympathy" because I love this comic, and don't want it to befall the fate of others I've seen.
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Aw, he looks so cute and sad in the last panel. I love the way you draw the memories on a black background like that, it adds a really cool effect.
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Inverted the colours? I love your style of drawing...it's hypnotising!
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nope! all that black is a whole lot of marker. and frayed nerves.
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